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Hi Rascalover, Felistia here.
I would really love it if you could review my poem Autumns Tale. It is a realistic\mystery poem.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Autumns-Tale-125389
Thanks for your time.

felistia wrote:Hi Rascalover, Felistia here.
I would really love it if you could review my poem Autumns Tale. It is a realistic\mystery poem.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/Autumns-Tale-125389
Thanks for your time.

All finished! Who's next?

Anyone need a review?

Hope and Me
please mate i need as many as possible on this one and its poetry

themanofstars wrote:https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/themanofstars/Hope-and-Me-126959
please mate i need as many as possible on this one and its poetry

Finished

Hi, me again.
Could you please review I am Water.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/I-am-Water-127001

Thanks for your time.

felistia wrote:Hi, me again.
Could you please review I am Water.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/I-am-Water-127001

Thanks for your time.

Finished Thanks!

Next up?

Hmm... would you be against reviewing semi-realistic fiction for a baby writer?

It's got your standard magic and monsters from Fantasy but is set on Earth (society itself is at the equivalent of the 1500s, technology-wise) and I try to keep things as grounded as I can.

Here's the link, if it interests you: War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

Whatever the answer, thanks for your time!

Costa wrote:Hmm... would you be against reviewing semi-realistic fiction for a baby writer?

It's got your standard magic and monsters from Fantasy but is set on Earth (society itself is at the equivalent of the 1500s, technology-wise) and I try to keep things as grounded as I can.

Here's the link, if it interests you: War of Dawn - Prologue and Chapter 1

Whatever the answer, thanks for your time!

Finished! Thanks for the request!

Anyone else?!

Hi, Felistia here again.

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic.
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. The first ten or so have a lot of review's on them so you don't have to review those ones. I really need reviews on the later chapters.
This is just the first link. I have quite a few chapters, so I didn't include the links or it might take up an entire page.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Quest-for-Fire-Book-One--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-124445
Thanks for your time
It's okay if you want to turn it down because of the fantasy thing. I won't get offended and you did say that you don't really like fantasy. I just wanted to ask.
Have a great day\night.

Can you please review the first chapter to my novel 'River Dreams'?

River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

Thank you!

felistia wrote:Hi, Felistia here again.

I would really like you to review my novel please.
It's a fantasy, action\adventure novel. It is a slight fanfic to the Wings of Fire series, but you don't need to know anything from those books to be able to read the story. I just need someone to treat it just like a book. Ignore the fanfic.
I really need someone to go through all the chapters please. The first ten or so have a lot of review's on them so you don't have to review those ones. I really need reviews on the later chapters.
This is just the first link. I have quite a few chapters, so I didn't include the links or it might take up an entire page.
https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work/felistia/The-Quest-for-Fire-Book-One--Into-the-Mists-Chapter-1-124445
Thanks for your time
It's okay if you want to turn it down because of the fantasy thing. I won't get offended and you did say that you don't really like fantasy. I just wanted to ask.
Have a great day\night.

Hi!!!! I'm so sorry this is so late! I never got a notification that someone posted in this thread! I will work on this eventually I promise!

artbyandream wrote:Can you please review the first chapter to my novel 'River Dreams'?

River Dreams Chapter One: What the darkness carries

Thank you!

Thanks for your request!! I will get to this as soon as possible!