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Wed Nov 26, 2008 8:40 pm
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Rascalover says...



Anything???
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Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:18 pm
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Rascalover says...



please? :smt009
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Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:26 pm
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KailaMarie says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic39491.html a review on this would be great!!
... :D ...
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Fri Dec 05, 2008 8:47 pm
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Rascalover says...



KailaMarie all done :) !

Whos next???????????????
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Mon Dec 08, 2008 9:06 pm
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Rascalover says...



free review any one.....
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Sun Dec 14, 2008 10:19 pm
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Rascalover says...



Bump********************
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Thu Dec 18, 2008 2:08 am
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Night Mistress says...



review for me, please.

topic31457.html
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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Mon Dec 22, 2008 6:43 pm
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Rascalover says...



I posted your review

Any one else??????
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 7:03 pm
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Night Mistress says...



topic32635.html - here is another one. it's chapter one.
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 8:16 pm
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Rascalover says...



Im really sorry but instead of giving you a bad review I wont review because I don't like the story line

any other offers??
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Mon Dec 22, 2008 9:58 pm
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Lost_in_dreamland says...



topic40616.html
Don't worry if you don't have time. If you do take as long as you like *-)
If you do get round to it then thanks so much :D
It's only 578 words long though ;)
Thankyou so much *-)
-Kirsten xxx
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 10:01 pm
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Im sorry its taken so long but I promise ill still do the review
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Tue Jan 06, 2009 11:42 pm
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Maki-Chan says...



well I really need my third chapter to be reviewed. Its not really important to know what "Silent Hill" is, even though its a fanfiction. All you need to know is that "Silent Hill" is a town that people's worst fears take shape.

topic40923.html

If you need to know what is happening Beth is looking for her missing sister. Right now she is currently in Silent Hill, with Sera. Sera is a really nice person who wants to help Beth, however Beth hates Sera.

prologue- Beth has a dream that her sister disappears, and it comes true

ch1- 4 years later Beth (18 years old) thinks about the past, and how no one really looked for her sister (Alex). Sera makes her appearance. Its highschool graduation day, and Beth leaves her hometown (Ashfield) and heads to Silent hill to find her sister. (Since she got a note in Alex's handwriting saying "Silent Hill").

ch2- Beth's car brakes down, and she has a strange dream. After she wakes up, Beth hitchhikes, and surprisingly Sera appears and offers her a ride. When they are driving Beth falls asleep, and has a nightmare.

ch3- topic40923.html

please review it *Begs*
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Fri Jan 09, 2009 9:24 pm
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Rascalover says...



reviewing now :)
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Fri Jan 09, 2009 11:25 pm
Rascalover says...



Lost_in_dreamland wrote:http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40616.html
Don't worry if you don't have time. If you do take as long as you like *-)
If you do get round to it then thanks so much :D
It's only 578 words long though ;)
Thankyou so much *-)
-Kirsten xxx


I have done your review hope it was helpful
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