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Tue Jan 24, 2012 2:54 am
Jas says...



viewtopic.php?f=5&t=92719

This please! Thanks so much! :D

I'd like a more writing and character based review rather than frammar and sentence structure and all that. :D
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Wed Jan 25, 2012 12:53 am
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Rascalover says...



All done. Any one next?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Thu Jan 26, 2012 2:46 am
Rascalover says...



*Bump*
Anyone?
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Sun Feb 05, 2012 10:28 pm
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Rascalover says...



Should I beg???
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Sun Feb 05, 2012 11:59 pm
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Sureal says...



lol, well as you're offering, I'd appreciate any feedback on the first chapter of Foxes - which can be found here: work.php?id=93102

Note, though - it is rated 18 for naughty language.
I wrote the above just for you.
  





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Mon Feb 06, 2012 9:08 am
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SirTobes says...



Hi, Not sure if you'll like, only part 1.Please review. Criticismwill be taken with open arms :D work.php?id=93232
There is no such thing as a stranger. Only friends we haven't met yet.

Previously Just Toby

  





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Thu Feb 09, 2012 6:28 pm
Rascalover says...



All done :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Fri Feb 10, 2012 7:22 am
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Emmzziee says...



work.php?id=93316
HIYA!

I'll review something of yours, too, if ya' like.
I want to play a game.
  





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Mon Feb 13, 2012 9:17 pm
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ahhhsmusch says...



I would love a review/criticism

work.php?id=93385
  





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Wed Feb 15, 2012 9:20 pm
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unsocialbutterfly says...



work.php?id=93416

This please and any other things of mine you want to!
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Fri Feb 24, 2012 9:11 pm
Kakali says...



Would you please review the first chapter of my novel, I would like to make it more enjoyable to read. :)

work.php?id=93603
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Fri Feb 24, 2012 10:23 pm
psudiname says...



could you review the first part of my short story?
work.php?id=93605
if anyone wants a review, post on my profile and I'll get to it in a couple days.
  





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Thu Mar 08, 2012 1:03 am
jemjive says...



So here's something I posted and I am eagerly awaiting a review....
work.php?id=93858
Please :)
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Sun Nov 23, 2014 10:23 pm
Rascalover says...



Hi guys!! I am back!! who needs or wants a review??
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

*points are given to anyone who gives me a review :) * My Novel novel.php?id=223

Who needs a review? :) topic38078.html
  





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Mon Nov 24, 2014 1:17 pm
Reneia says...



I do! :D I Am.
"You are... a new flower on an old Elm tree. What? NOT MY FAULT YOU REMIND ME OF A PINK FLOWER ON AN OLD ELM TREE" -Tuesday

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https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?f=188&t=102765. I review!

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