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Fri Jul 27, 2018 7:37 pm
Emmzziee says...



Alison :)
I want to play a game.
  





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Mon Aug 13, 2018 11:42 pm
Fishr says...



No Name

Please.
The sadness drains through me rather than skating over my skin. It travels through every cell to reach the ground. I filter it yet strangely enough, I keep what was pure and it is the dirt that leaves.
  





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Mon Oct 22, 2018 3:58 pm
xJoeyx says...



I'm writing a new story and need reviews for it so far/
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"There is more that connects us than can possibly divide us"
  





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Mon Dec 03, 2018 6:13 am
Rascalover says...



Hey guys! Looking to do some reviewing since I now work on third shift! :)

Bring on the request! :twisted: :D
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Tue Dec 04, 2018 5:33 pm
potatoefry2001 says...



please review "Hurt" and "Pain pain" by me!! Thanks :)
  





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Wed Dec 05, 2018 4:22 am
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Wed Dec 05, 2018 5:34 am
Rascalover says...



PoTatOe001 wrote:please review "Hurt" and "Pain pain" by me!! Thanks :)

Hey can you reply with a link to these works, and I would love too!
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Wed Dec 05, 2018 5:35 am
Rascalover says...



GodfreysBouillon wrote:People like you are awesome, just accepting review requests. It helps a lot of people.
I have one of my own, a historical fiction piece set in the New World, 1520.

Alvarado



I am glad you think i am awesome. i will start reading your piece of work tonight, but it may take some time to actually get the review done :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Thu Dec 06, 2018 5:24 am
Rascalover says...



Done and Done.

Anyone else need a review?? lol I do, but I can't review my own work objectively, so if I give you a review feel free to go to my work and review some of it if it interests you.
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Wed Dec 12, 2018 1:47 pm
Starve says...



Hi Rascalover !

I'd really appreciate it if you could review my short story — The Absurdity of hope
its final draft will possibly be an entry for a contest, and I'd be glad if you could comment on if the premise is relevant to the prompt (which is included at the end.) otherwise I'll write another one.

Thanks a lot and I did see that you wanted a review on some works of yours so I will drop a review on them in the coming days if needed.
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Wed Dec 12, 2018 2:45 pm
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I'll definitely get to this today to tomorrow and I would great appreciate it if you could review The unfinished diary of TBJ 🙂
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Thu Dec 13, 2018 6:00 am
Rascalover says...



Traves wrote:Hi Rascalover !

I'd really appreciate it if you could review my short story — The Absurdity of hope
its final draft will possibly be an entry for a contest, and I'd be glad if you could comment on if the premise is relevant to the prompt (which is included at the end.) otherwise I'll write another one.

Thanks a lot and I did see that you wanted a review on some works of yours so I will drop a review on them in the coming days if needed.



Done :)
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

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Fri Dec 14, 2018 7:54 pm
Aranya says...



Hi Rascalover!!

Could you pls review this slam poem on Gay Love ?? :)
Honey and Sunshine

Shall always be ready to help you in any form!!

Thank you so much!!
Last edited by Aranya on Sun Dec 23, 2018 9:17 am, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Sat Dec 22, 2018 6:01 am
Aranya says...



Hi Rascalover

Could you pls review my slam poem on gay love?

Honey and Sunshine

Pls help me it's for a competition.

Thank you so much
  








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