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Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:39 pm
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Night Mistress says...



here's another.

topic32712.html - chapter 2
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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Sat Dec 20, 2008 5:48 pm
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Fellow says...



Done. *smiles* anyone else?
Life is a song. You just need to know how to sing it.

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Sat Dec 20, 2008 8:56 pm
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Mars says...



Hiya!
topic40484.html
Thanks bunches.
'life tastes sweeter when it's wrapped in poetry'
-the wombats


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Tue Dec 23, 2008 2:53 pm
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Fellow says...



Done. Anyone else?
Life is a song. You just need to know how to sing it.

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Tue Dec 23, 2008 3:04 pm
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scasha says...



Hey Again Fellow!

I'm sorry if I'm asking you again for a critique! Anyway here's the link: post385713.html#385713

It's a bit long so I'll totally donate points if you do it and definitley feel free to post more stuff for me to critique of yours in my critique booth! Also, please don't do grammer or line edits. I just want to know if the plot is good.

Thanks!

Scasha
  








Sometimes I'm terrified of my heart; of its constant hunger for whatever it is it wants. The way it stops and starts.
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