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Sat Aug 30, 2008 11:18 am
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SunshineOrange says...



Okay okay.

I want a new star ^^ Sooo, it's time for you all to post your links here and I will review them all! Oh yes, but you must.. Give me vitual boo-berry muffins!

-Drooled.- Yummy.

So c'mon folks. Step right up.

Things I will review;

- Any Kind of Poetry
- Romantic Fiction
- Fantasy Fiction
- Action/Adventure Fiction
- Lyrics
- Photography & Art

Completed;

"Ours" by Azila
"A Bloodied Rose; Part One" by Tabithalillian
Last edited by SunshineOrange on Fri Sep 19, 2008 11:34 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Mon Sep 01, 2008 4:53 pm
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Azila says...



No requests yet? I'll start it off: post419983.html#419983

It's called "Ours" and it's in Other Fiction... I hope that's okay with you?

Thank you! And please let me know if there's anything I can crit in return. :)
~Azila~





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Tue Sep 02, 2008 11:34 pm
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Tabithalillian says...



ok, please review my two storys, one may be a short story and one is a work in progress and much longer. . .here are the links both a romantic vampire fiction and I am trying to break free fromt he twilight mold with both of them:
A Bloodied Rose:
topic35039.html
My Take On Phantom Of The Opera:

topic35505.html
Living in a tower





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Mon Sep 22, 2008 9:16 am
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SunshineOrange says...



Come one! Roll up, roll up!

Next please ;D
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Wed Sep 24, 2008 4:42 am
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Icaruss says...



topic35447.html

Would you, please? =D
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Sat Sep 27, 2008 1:49 pm
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deleted2 says...



Heya,

I've finished the review of your story, by the way, so go check it out :D

Would you review this for me:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic36307.html

Thanks !

XxxDo





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Wed Oct 01, 2008 4:11 pm
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KJ says...



If you have time, I need a lot of help with this story: topic27228.html

If you get around to it, I would appreciate it...





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Fri Oct 03, 2008 2:09 pm
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olivia1987uk says...



If you wouldn't mind....

topic36769.html
Olivia
xxx
If you wake up in the morning and all you can think of is writing, then you're a writer...





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Fri Oct 03, 2008 3:46 pm
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fun4eva says...



If you don't mid I'd like reviews for chapter 3 and 4 of my novel...
And umm...don't worry you don't have to read the previous chapters to understand this one...
YOu may be a bit confused with the characters intoduced previously but that won't be much of a problem...waiting for you review!!!

Thsanks a ton in advance!!!

topic36721.html

topic36734.html





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Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:30 pm
zoorah12 says...



Please.


topic41007.html
I read somewhere... how important it is in life not necessarily to be strong... but to feel strong.





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Mon Jan 05, 2009 10:40 pm
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Night Mistress says...



topic41359.html

can you review this for me?
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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Tue Jun 06, 2023 8:09 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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