Young Writers Society

So I've decided to go public with this enterprise. The YWS economy needs some revitalization and the Instructors need a better name. I critique pretty much everything, although I generally despise Fantasy fiction and I can't provide much help in the Art/photography area.

I enjoy what I write. So if you've read anything of mine and you've written something similar, toss it my way. I'd love to help. I also enjoy historical fiction quite a lot, especially the 20s-40s eras and everything from the 60s on up.

Some recent critiques of mine:

A Script: Grey (1)
A Poem: Hit and Run
A Story: Pieces of Wooden Glass

What I critique:

-- Fiction [Action/Adventure, Romance, Science Fiction, Historical, Other]
-- Poetry
-- Scripts

What I don't critique:

-- Fantasy fiction (Nooooooooo!)
-- Lyrics

My basic critique elements for Fiction include:

-- Overall (I'm very good at adressing the big picture)
-- Literary techniques
-- Dialogue
-- Sentence fluency
-- Character quality

+ I rarely adress grammar

My basic critique elements for Poetry include:

-- Imagery help
-- Rhythm
-- Coherency
-- Line-by-line
-- Overall

In line for critique:

- Penguin's Fortuitous Graves

Critiques finished:

- Jared's A Thank You Note for Donny
- Conrad's Mirror, Mirror on the Wall
- Wiseman's What the Hand's Have to Say

-Kylan

Hey, Kylan! I don't have anything action/adventure/shootemups, but I have this, and it only has like 2 real helpful reviews. I'd really like some help on it.

-Jared

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html

If you could help me out with this, I would be ever so grateful.

*weeps*

No fantasy? None? *cruzzlesnapgrowlagghurgghnofairgrrohwellyourchoicecrankledarnohpantsstillnofair!*

[s]You just, er, finished a critique for me, and it was very helpful. Thanks. But, er, if you don't mind... I have a script that hasn't any reviews, and you're the only person that I know that actually critiques scripts. You're probably sick of me. -.-

Robbing Blockbuster

-Jared[/s]

Hey, dude. You don't have to do it anymore. It's deleted. Thankkkks!

-Jared

I know that the piece i am about to give you has all gold stars from everyone, but, I would like to make it even better!

It's a short poem

topic33990.html

Thanks!

Hullo Kylan.

I'd really like it if you could send some love my way on this: topic34368.html

It's a poem in the Dramatic section, titled "Fortuitous Graves"

Any help = much appreciated.

*Hearts* Le Penguin.

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