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Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:21 pm
tinny says...



Our slogan?

Fish; she may be slow but she gets the job done

Anyhoo, tinny fish here reporting for duty! If you want a critique from me, then this is the place to ask! It may sometimes take me a while to get around to it, but even if it takes me a while I can promise it will get done.

Of course, I do try to get things done in good time ;)


will critique

Most fiction, fan-fiction depending on if I know the topic, non-fiction if anyone really wants me to. I can take a peek at art but don't expect a great deal.
If there's anything you'd like me to specifically look at just let me know, otherwise I'll just ramble on in the typical way that I normally do ^^

can't critique

Keep me away from romance and historical fiction or I'll simply fail. I really can't do poetry or lyrical things--sorry!


maximum number of requests

Only three at a time please, because I can be terribly slow when I get distraced by things XD


in return?

A thank you is pretty much all I'd like ;D and a hello now and again if it ever takes your fancy. Oh, and if you like the critique, do let me know so I can stick up a few examples ;)


So, just leave a link and I'll get to work!

to do list:

I are empty :(


done list:

andimlovegalore -- nicotine and spice
jamie_rocks -- the love note
Last edited by tinny on Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:53 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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Sun Jul 27, 2008 11:37 pm
andimlovegalore says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic32723.html this great big lazy thing needs something, because I'm failing at writing the 3rd part, a response might wake me up ^^





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Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:22 am
Jamie_rocks says...



topic33373.html

Okay, the newly edited first chapter to my supernatural novel.
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