Young Writers Society

Open for requests!

I will Critique:

Fantasy
Sci/Fi
Historical Fiction
Romance
Action/Adventure
Other Fiction
Scripts
Art/Photography

I will not critique:

Poetry
Lyrics
Non-Fiction
Fanfiction

What I focus on:

Character Development
Dialog
Word Choice
Overall Flow
Sentence Structure
Grammar

Send me the title of the piece you want reviewed, as well as a link to that piece and I'll get it done Asap. Thanks!

Completed:

TL G-Wooster - A Fool's Hope, Chapter 7
Medusa - Fragments of Indulgence
Spazztardchild - The Scient Witch, Chapter 1 Part 1

-May

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"A Fool's Hope", Fantasy. It's on its seventh chapter there, so if you can't get all of them done, can you just do the last? Please? For I come bearing gifts...

*presses button on remote control*

*a panel of the wall falls down to reveal a multi dimensional vault stuffed with muffins*

Hi! I know I've been asking everyone, but second opinions are the best... will you please critique either my Dawn With Fox or my Fragments of Indulgence on my Featured Works? Gracias.

--Medusa.

Done, Twit.

Medusa, I'll start on yours tomorrow (July 2). I don't have time tonight.

-May

Can you please review The Scient Witch?

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There is also a prologue but you don't have to do anything for that

Thanks!

Done Medusa and Spazztard. I enjoyed both of your pieces.

-May

Goddess Fallen
Purdy please?

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-Alice