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Thu Aug 21, 2008 1:15 pm
BigBadBear says...



Eh, it's deleted. Not worth critiquing for. So yeah. Skip me! ^_^

-Jared
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Would love help on this.





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Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:00 am
romance otaku says...



could you please review my chapter two of my story, Heart Stabbed Blade? it is an fantasy-school-romancy type thing, but the romance isnt that strong yet, so you should be good.

the link is in my sig, and if you would like to read chapter 1 first, there is a link to it on chapter 2

thank you
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Sat Apr 01, 2023 2:56 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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