could you please review my chapter two of my story, Heart Stabbed Blade? it is an fantasy-school-romancy type thing, but the romance isnt that strong yet, so you should be good.
the link is in my sig, and if you would like to read chapter 1 first, there is a link to it on chapter 2
thank you
-otaku
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