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Sun May 25, 2008 7:00 pm
Aedomir says...



Why are you doing this?
Because I am fantastic. :P

What do you review?
In theory, anything, but I must remind you that I am not perfect when it comes to scripts and lyrics, but I will gladly have a look.

What do you review in the review?
I will usually start with a line-by-line review, and then decide what is good, what isn't and what as a writer, you must improve on.

Fire away!
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We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.





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Sun May 25, 2008 8:23 pm
Icaruss says...



I've got a story called Anniversary. Please, please, please critique it! Thanks.
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Mon May 26, 2008 11:28 am
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No problem.
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.





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Mon May 26, 2008 5:28 pm
Eimear says...



I've got a poem?

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We are all in the gutter, but some of us are looking at the stars.

Oscar Wilde.





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Mon May 26, 2008 6:33 pm
Aedomir says...



Ah yes, I had a read of that earlier - time to do some reviewing!
We are all Sociopaths: The Prologue

Sociopath: So • ci • o • path noun
1. Someone who believes their behaviour is right.
2. Human.





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Wed Jun 11, 2008 8:55 am
Twit says...



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Thanks!
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Wed Mar 29, 2023 8:17 pm
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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