Young Writers Society

Hello everyone,

So I haven't been on yws for a while now because life was just too hectic for the past couple of months but things are beginning to settle down. I'll have finals out of the way soon so I can really spend quality time here. I love to review but do have certain guidelines:

1) I love to read about love, hehe. Romatic Fiction, Fantasy Fiction, Fanfiction, Science Fiction, Other Fiction, etc.. I don't provide the best insight for poems and lyrics so, unless you want a bad review, don't request 'em.

2) Rating: Any

I think that's about it. Bring on the requests! My reviews are usually geared towards characterization. I do look at grammar and plot but those are secondary when compared to the main character(s).

Thanks,

*starry.

Guess I'll be the first to ask for a critique. ^_^

Caelestis: Keeper's Throne is a fantasy fiction story/novel I'm working on. It's actually a sequel to my Child of Ashes: Outcast story I was writing, but I decided to work on the sequel as a way to get more background information and ideas for the first story. I only have one chapter up of this story, but I may (or may not, depends) have another chapter up soon. This story doesn't have any reviews yet, so anything you can give would be appreciated.

Hey
I would really love if you could critique my first two chapters of The Duty:
Chapter One and
Chapter Two

Thanks so much! If you ever need crits, let me know!

I would really love it if you read The Brink. It hasn't gotten very many reviews.

Thank you so much!!

I need reviews for the story Uncommited to the Opposite Gender. It's about a dude who just recently broke up with a girl and fell for a new-comer who is a guy. The story is set in 1st person point of view, all said by the main character commonly called Zen. If you can review this, I'd be grateful.