Young Writers Society

Please, please, please, please, please send me out of my misery.

I want another blue star. 'Nuff said. Please. I really do.

Gimme your links!

I do:

Everything but non fiction and fantasy. Sorry.

To do:


Done:

JFW1415's two pieces. - They were amazing.

Eimear's Romance - Totally worth critiquing.

Twit's Fantasy - Her best so far.

Aliza's Raincatcher

Kylan's Machinations

Jabber's 12 Shocks of Christmas Pt. 7

Ambercoutlis's Meeting Future Girl

Jabber's The Dragon, the Dog, and the Dove

JFW1415's Suicide Kills Us All

JFW1415's Out of Focus

Midnight Gladius's Triple Point Segment 1 & Segment 2

JFW1415's Smiling's a Good Start

Rory Legend's Think Chapter One & Chapter Two

Niccy_V's Scars

Conrad Rice's Mirror, Mirror on the Wall

Sportgurl46's Bruises

PenguinAttack's Singed Finger and Disappointments

Suzanne's Into the Dark

Hey, I'll by all means put you out of your misery.

It's called 'Two for Joy' and it's in the Action/Adventure fiction section.

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Thanks in advance, best wishes

Eimear

A customer already? Dude! Awesome!

I'm looking at it right. Have the crit posted in a few!

-Jared

Part One
Part Two

Please? They feel so...lonely.

~JFW1415

Awesome. I have everything up to date.

Please, I'm so bored right now. Pile me high with critiques!!

-Jared

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Pwetty please'm? Fantasy, that do you? Ignore the reviews before, that draft's been tooken down, and the chapter that's up is the only one that counts.

Tuchly ma in advance!

Done!

Amazing.

-Jared

*is bumping because I want some critiques*

Alright... if you wouldn't mind: topic30168.html

Thank yo so much! Let me know if there's anything you want me to crit in return.
~Azila~

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Care to read?

-Kylan

'Sup BigBadBear.

I just started this piece: its probably crappy, which is why I'm on my knees, begging for a critique. So could you be incredibly harsh and rip the story apart with your teeth, and leave it bleeding out in the street for it to die?

It's the first part of hopefully more (because I always start a multiple part thing and never get past the first one. But this one is promising!) and so, thanks a bunch!

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Its called, "You're on in Five." 'Bout radio, sort of-ish.

Whoa.

I didn't even realize you guys posted this. *is a loser* Anyway, YES! I'm critiquing right now! Thanks dudes!

-Jared

Finished all of those. I'm free and bored.

Any more pieces?

...

And if any of you fellow writers have time, could you take a look at my portfolio? Nearly anything is horrible and needs to be ripped up.

If you could help me with this piece, I would greatly appreciate it

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29980.html

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Next chapter of Scavenger... if you wouldn't mind, please Bear?