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I want to Critique, (I give very long ones)



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Sun May 04, 2008 7:52 pm
thewritingdoc says...



Post away!

I would like to hear anything...

But again; I would prefer poetry or short stories as that's my number one area.

Uhmm.. what else do I have to say..?

I'm a pretty sweet person when I crit but if I just plainly dislike something I won't be kind about it. I'll let you know my opinion.

Please, Please, Please remember you don't have to take my suggestions. Go with your heart when editing and what YOU feel sounds best. However; you may want to look over your crits at least a few times. That's something every good writer should remember.

In exchange for my crits if you had the time it'd be nice of you to review some of my work and perhaps post your comments on it. Although, you don't HAVE to. It's on a voluntary basis.

Also, I love having friends so add me. And, Pm's make me smile so PM me!


So foegt to include a link when you tell me to crit something in your post please.
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Thanks for reading,


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    I'd rather write about this world than live in it
    and I'd rather play music all day
    and read and wander around bookstores
    and watch humans
    but not be one of them.





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Mon May 05, 2008 1:31 am
chocoholic says...



I have a song that wants more critiques, would you be willing to do that for me?

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I'll definetely add you to my friends.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*





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Mon May 05, 2008 8:33 pm
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I have a poem, if you don't mind. :) topic29783.html
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Mon May 12, 2008 8:26 pm
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CK Lynn says...



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A poem of mine. One of the better ones I've written (though that isn't saying much).
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Mon May 12, 2008 8:39 pm
Rei says...



*waves her hand around and bounces up and down* Me want crits!

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Muteman says...



Eh, only got 3 things up at the moment in the ol' portfolio, but take your pic I suppose.





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