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Sun Dec 12, 2010 2:57 am
Persephonia gave me an awesome review on my NaNo prologue that I posted, like, three days ago. XD She went really in-depth and explained what she liked and also my mistakes and how to fix them. Kudos to all listed here!
"There's a big difference between shooting a target and shooting a charging Wargal. A target isn't usually trying to kill you."
~Halt, Ranger's Apprentice Book Two:
The Burning Bridge
Sun Dec 12, 2010 3:44 am
I'd like to thank
for a brilliant crit on my photography. You rock!
Pretending in words was too tentative, too vulnerable, too embarrassing to let anyone know.
- Ian McEwan in Atonement
kimi: influencing others since GOD KNOWS WHEN.
Thu Dec 23, 2010 7:11 pm
I received a wonderful review from Skins! Thanks Skins!
HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
Stories Poems © As of January 1st 2014
Need a review? Feel free to ask me!
Sat Dec 25, 2010 5:07 am
I'd like to mention Delmarria for all of his awesome poetry reviews.
I'm striving to be the Architect of the Apocalypse, Master of the Massacre, Ruler of the Rapture, and the Führer of the Fatal.
"It is the tale, not he who tells it."
Wed Mar 02, 2011 7:05 pm
A lot of people give epic reviews. Some people who give in my opinion the type of reveiw
These are a few people who have given amazing reviews.
So thanks guys, I owe you!
If, when you mean to type
, you know you belong.
Mon Dec 26, 2011 11:24 pm
Dogs is awesome!
“...it's better to feel the ache inside me like demons scratching at my heart than it is to feel numb the way a dead body feels when you touch it."
Tue Jan 10, 2012 1:14 pm
! She has some great reviews.
Lavvie's Loving Reviews
What is to give light must endure burning. – Viktor Frankl
Wed Feb 01, 2012 2:45 am
ZlyWick is awesome too. (Formerly GoldenQuill)
"Elementary, my dear Watson"
Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:32 am
Searria is awesome. She helps with big ideas and moves on to grammar and wording issues.
Sun Apr 29, 2012 9:23 pm
MiaParamore gave me a really good review a while ago
Thu May 24, 2012 6:35 am
Great reviewer, Master_Yoda is. Inspirational words, he brings. Outstanding grammatical and practical knowledge of dialogue, he has. Really makes me want to correct my mistakes and learn from them, he does.
Fri Jun 15, 2012 6:54 pm
Rydia gave me an amazing review on my lyrics!
Bilbo: What have I got in my pocket?
Bilbo: Nope, guess again.
Gollum: A knife! No, no...
Bilbo: Wrong again.
Gollum: String! Or... Nothing!
Sat Jun 16, 2012 12:31 am
Jabber for reviewing all of the new lyrics I've posted and being really friendly and honest!
It does not do to dwell on dreams and forget to live.
I want to read your work!
Ask me anything. Talk to me about anything. Seriously. My PM box is always open <3
Thu Aug 08, 2013 1:48 am
I've got some awesomeness to report!
I want to report
, @HomeschooledTeen , and
for their awesome reviews
Each of these amazing members takes the time to point out smaller problems like grammar / spelling without getting bogged down to the point that that's all they talk about. These lovelies also make sure to give their impressions as a reader: what things were working for them and points where they got confused or lost. Of course, they were there with technical support and suggestions as well, letting their inner editors come out so they could work constructively with the authors to build better pieces.
Amazing, strong reviewers I just wanted to commend!
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Sat Sep 21, 2013 12:41 am
“And how shall I think of you?' He considered a moment and then laughed. 'Think of me with my nose in a book!”
— Susanna Clarke, Jonathan Strange & Mr Norrell
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