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Thu Jun 05, 2008 7:39 pm
aestar101 says...



Now, I will be accepting photography and artwork.
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Fri Jun 06, 2008 11:47 pm
aestar101 says...



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Tue Jun 10, 2008 7:32 pm
Icaruss says...



Tangled Up In Blue is a three-part Romantic Story. Can you pleaaaase crit that?
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Tue Jun 10, 2008 9:14 pm
aestar101 says...



It's rated R, but I critque it anyway.
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Thu Jun 12, 2008 3:58 pm
Sapphire says...



Hi, I had a poem that I'd had a bit of trouble on. I'd love some more thoughts on it, if you have time:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic30742.html

Thank you! :)
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Thu Jun 19, 2008 9:42 pm
aestar101 says...



Sapphire I reviewed your poem. Iccarrus yours it going to take a tad longer since yours is a story. Sorry for any inconveince. :(
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Sat Jun 21, 2008 3:19 pm
aestar101 says...



Icaruss, Im finshed reviewing the first intallment. Good job!
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Sat Jun 21, 2008 5:33 pm
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Icaruss I just got finished criting Tangled Up In Blue. Excellent peice!
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Mon Jul 07, 2008 1:25 pm
aestar101 says...



I'm baaaccck!
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Tue Aug 12, 2008 4:59 pm
aestar101 says...



Back again!!!
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Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:08 pm
Jamie_rocks says...



Hi, I need help with a supernatural story I'm working on. It's really only the second one that needs reviews, but you'll have to read the first one to know what's going on. Thanks!

Chapter 1: topic33373.html

Chapter 2: topic34363.html

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Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:25 pm
CK Lynn says...



Hi, i'd love it if you could do this poem
topic31719.html
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Sun Aug 17, 2008 9:22 pm
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CK Lynn, your poem is finshed. Jamie stories take a little longer for me, but I'll get to it.
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Fri Aug 22, 2008 2:13 am
romance otaku says...



could you pls reveiw my chapter two of my book. the link is in my sig, and a link to chapter 1 is on chapter 2

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Wed Aug 27, 2008 9:26 pm
Gadi. says...



We're thinking about you

I would lurrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrve a critique to that poem. :D Thank youu.
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