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Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:26 pm
aestar101 says...



I would like to help people with their peices. I'm not so much for grammar. I critque more for content. I not one for sci-fi. I specialize in Romantic Fiction, Ohter Fiction, and poerty. I can deal with questionable content, but I can't do anything X- rated. Hope I help.
AE :D
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Mon Apr 21, 2008 12:02 am
Wolf says...



[url]http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic29151.html]RUNAWAY: Chapter One[/url]

:D Thanks!
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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Mon Apr 21, 2008 3:58 pm
aestar101 says...



My first coustomer!!! I reviewed you story and it was great :D ! Please come again!!!! :D :D :D :D
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Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:33 pm
chocoholic says...



I have a short story called How You Break My Heart (I've posted the last bit now). Do you think you could take a look at that?
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*





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Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:21 am
JFW1415 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

There are three parts, and it's due soon. Could you check it over really quickly?

Thanks so much!

~JFW1415





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Wed Apr 23, 2008 11:39 pm
aestar101 says...



Chocololic and JFW1415 your stories are reviewed.
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Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:44 am
OverEasy says...



Hi there!


topic29341.html


Please and Thank You!
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Mon Apr 28, 2008 4:59 pm
aestar101 says...



Overeasy. Your review is posted :).
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Thu May 01, 2008 11:39 pm
Periwinkle says...



Hey there! Can I have a review for "The Shiner"? Thanks if you do!

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Sat May 10, 2008 7:28 pm
aestar101 says...



I reviwed it. I'm sorry that I wasn't so prompt. :(
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Thu May 22, 2008 8:49 pm
aestar101 says...



Anyone interested? I really want to help.
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Thu May 22, 2008 10:23 pm
Icaruss says...



I have three poems I'd like reviewed. I know you can't do three of them, but just choose one and do that, and I'll be forever thankful.
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Fri May 23, 2008 10:45 pm
aestar101 says...



It would help alot of I knew which poems they were. What are the names?
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Sun May 25, 2008 5:02 pm
Icaruss says...



Things Seen In Cab-Ride #276
Just Like Bobby Zimmerman's Blues
Don't Act All Hurt/Don't Be Silly

Sorry about that. Thanks!
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Tue Jun 03, 2008 6:23 pm
aestar101 says...



Done Icarrus. :)
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