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Sat Apr 19, 2008 8:18 am
Squall says...



Hello stranger! Welcome to my shop! What are you buying?

But seriously, all I can offer you are free critiques. If you know me, I can be a critical critiquer at times (even harsh if I think your piece isn't up to my liking). I normally spend around an hour reviewing a piece in terms of ideas and how powerful your sentences are. Therefore, I am your man if you want an honest and detailed critique.

I tend to review mostly fantasy fiction, but I can also review sci fci and romance. If you have an "other fiction" piece, I also review that. I can't review poetry however, as I really don't know much about structure (but I think I can review it in terms of ideas).

I don't critique parts too, I prefer to review the whole thing.

Ok that should be about it. So post people!

Edit: By part, I mean I don't want to read part 1 of a chapter. I want to either read the entire chapter or the entire piece.
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Sun Apr 20, 2008 7:53 pm
yoha_ahoy says...



Dream of the Fayth wrote:I don't critique parts too, I prefer to review the whole thing.


I will definitely contact you then once I finish Circus Pirates! :D

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Mon Apr 21, 2008 4:51 am
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yoha_ahoy wrote:
Dream of the Fayth wrote:I don't critique parts too, I prefer to review the whole thing.


I will definitely contact you then once I finish Circus Pirates! :D

~Yoyo 8)


Well chapters count too Yoha.
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Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:09 pm
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Righto! Here's Part 1! *salutes Andy sir*

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