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Mon Apr 14, 2008 5:38 am
whence says...



Hey! Ed here. I'll crit any and all poetry, lyrics, and art. If I really like you, you might be able to convince me to crit short prose too ;).

Anyway... in return, critting my stuff is cool, but not necessary.


So! Either post links here, or PM them to me. Your choice.
The good parts of a book may be only something a writer is lucky enough to overhear or it may be the wreck of his whole damn life — and one is as good as the other.
Ernest Hemingway





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Mon Apr 14, 2008 6:00 am
chocoholic says...



I'd love critique on my song, Mama's Smile

topic28448.html

Thanks!
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*





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Fri Mar 11, 2011 1:00 pm
lele253isme says...



I'd love for you to do mine.





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Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:48 am
UrbanNomad says...



Hey I need some feedback on my poem "Clouds"
topic87751.html
If you could have a look soon that would be great
Thanks, Oliver





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Mon Mar 18, 2024 6:12 pm
DreamyAlice says...



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