Young Writers Society

It's physically impossible for me not to ask for one from the amazingness that is Sam.

Out of Focus

Thanks so much! And I shall critique your stuff for my contest shortly. But I haven't written in ages (well, not really, haha) so I've been putting off critiques for a bit. BUT! Now I shall focus solely on editing and critiquing.

~JFW1415

:O Ma'am Sam! You are looking lonely there being all awesome.

If you could: post398962.html#398962

It's nothing brilliant, but it's for a contest, if you could take a look?

*Hearts* Le Penguin.

Saaaaaaam!

topic33874.html

I would very much like feedback on this. Thank you!

-Jared

Um, is groveling required in order to get a review?

This is the first chapter of a fiction story I'm working on. It's a little long, but I'll give you points for the review. No rush of course.

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Oh, almost forgot. *Bows*

*Lies prone on the ground*

Hey, there. I was wondering if you could review this:

What if Beauregard Was a Giant Chicken?

...as I may use it for contests pertaining to college scholarships.

Thank you, verily.

*crawls back from whence he came*

*Poke*

Edited version of Out of Focus.

Slay it?

Thanks so much! PM me to return the favor. (Actually, I owe you six critiques... XXD)

~JFW1415

Samsamsamsamsamsam!!!

I think you may be interested in my most recent story [Snowfall in Israel]. It deals with Ahmadinejad, Israel, and nuclear bombs.

Yay!

-Kylan

I was informed that the character in this story was lacking characterization. I was also told that you were the person to turn to in matters like this. Any help that you could give me on making him more sophisticated would be appreciated. If you feel the need to tear into other parts of the story, go ahead and do that as well.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html

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