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Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:09 pm
Jasmine Hart says...

I'll critique poetry if you pop the links here. I tend to avoid soppy love poetry...I personally don't like it so it's hard for me to be objective. I tend to be quite detailed in my feedback, and am precise about words and rhythm and avoiding cliches, but I'm one of those "If you can't say anything nice..." people, at least with writing, so I will always praise something. (There's always something to praise!)

I'd appreciate it if you'd pm me after putting the link here, as I may forget about this thread...
"Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
-Maya Angelou

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Sun Sep 18, 2011 11:02 am
UrbanNomad says...

Hello :)
So I hear you are interested in poetry analysis...
Please please have a look at my work, it is titled 'Reflections of a Nomad' and will appear soon in a journal of young peoples poetry in New Zealand.
the link is:

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Tue Sep 20, 2011 8:09 pm
silented1 says...


Don't destroy my selfesteem too much, please.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html

For in everything it is no easy task to find the middle ... anyone can get angry—that is easy—or give or spend money; but to do this to the right person, to the right extent, at the right time, with the right motive, and in the right way, that is not for everyone, nor is it easy; wherefore goodness is both rare and laudable and noble.
— Aristotle