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Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:09 pm
Jasmine Hart says...

I'll critique poetry if you pop the links here. I tend to avoid soppy love poetry...I personally don't like it so it's hard for me to be objective. I tend to be quite detailed in my feedback, and am precise about words and rhythm and avoiding cliches, but I'm one of those "If you can't say anything nice..." people, at least with writing, so I will always praise something. (There's always something to praise!)

I'd appreciate it if you'd pm me after putting the link here, as I may forget about this thread...
"Just like moons and like suns,
With the certainty of tides,
Just like hopes springing high,
Still I'll rise."
-Maya Angelou

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Sun Sep 18, 2011 11:02 am
UrbanNomad says...

Hello :)
So I hear you are interested in poetry analysis...
Please please have a look at my work, it is titled 'Reflections of a Nomad' and will appear soon in a journal of young peoples poetry in New Zealand.
the link is:

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Tue Sep 20, 2011 8:09 pm
silented1 says...


Don't destroy my selfesteem too much, please.
[quote]If it's arguable, then it probably is." - Xeriana X

Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html

here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a treee called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
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