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Fri Jan 27, 2012 3:00 am
misstoria says...



I'd love if you'd review this and tell me what you think:
viewtopic.php?f=8&t=92963
Just a F.Y.I. there are two poems in this topic both on the idea of "Life is...."
You are more than the choices that you've made, you are more than the sum of your past mistakes. You are more than the problems you create, You'v been remade.

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Sat Jan 28, 2012 7:37 am
Lava says...



Dude?Pretty please?
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You know it's cuz ILU sooo much. <3
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Thu Feb 09, 2012 2:55 am
LadySpark says...



Hello LoveyPenguin! :D
Would you pretty please review this poem of mine?
I'm not really looking for grammar. More, execution and ideas and flow, and such.Also the feeling you got when you read it. I know I have to submit something for you to review for the Christmas Poetry contest eventually, so why not now? xD
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hush, my sweet
these tornadoes are for you


-Richard Siken


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Sun Apr 27, 2014 3:13 am
Aley says...



New Rooms Reopened, yeah right. Here's your link in case you log off <3 I hope you find it easy to critique.
  





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Thu Jun 26, 2014 4:11 am
joshuapaul says...



If you are still reviewing, this, And where exactly is it that we're heading? (URGENT NITPICKS NEEDED), could do with your careful eye.

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