Young Writers Society

I'm back open!
What I critique:
-Poetry [of all kinds]
-Historical Fiction
-Other Fiction
-Romance
-Scripts/Plays

What I don't normally critique:
-Lyrics
-Fantasy Fiction
-Science Fiction
-Art

*If you have something under the "don't" category but would like a critique anyway, ask for it, but I cannot make any promises that you will receive a critique. If you do receive a critique, it may be a bad one.

To Request a Critique

If you would like a critique, just post here! I would appreciate it greatly if you included the link. In fact, you have more of a chance of receiving the critique if you post a link with it. Please do not request more than one review at a time. If there is something specific to the work you would like me to comment on (plot flow, character development, etc.) then let me know here. If you would like a copy edit rather than a full critique, say for an English paper or something, I can do that as well.

I will periodically make posts about what I have critiqued, but otherwise I may not reply in this thread. If you have any questions/comments then PM me.

Note: Please do not request reviews for someone other than yourself. I will only review something if it is requested by the person who posted/wrote it.

Reviews Finished

Gingerbread by Luvzi12
ThinPrettySmartStrong --- Lost by jasminebells
Frozen Rose Part 1 by Lava
Rosebushes by Esmé

Hi Suzanne!

Food Poem

Could you take a look at this for me?

Hey Suze! Would you ming looking at this? I'd still like to improve it...

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Hi would you mind looking at these?

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Please and thank you

I'd love one on this if you get a chance;

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I'd be only too happy to return the favour. Just PM me with a link if there's anything I can look at for you, but I think I'm a better poetry critic than a prose critic.

I'd LOVE a review on this...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post346536.html#346536

Really; your critiques are amazing. O.o

It seems you have many in-depth reviews on the pieces you showed us you'd like more on. If you still want more, let me know, and I will critique on of them (whichever you'd prefer.) If you have a fresher piece, I'd also be willing to do that. I just feel I'll be echoing people at this point.

Thanks!

~JFW1415

Hello! So I am back for one more.

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Please and Thank you!

OverEasy

Hey,

You told me to post this on your thread. So here it is

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Please and Thank You!

OverEasy

Do you critique FanFiction?

If you do, umm pleaaase....... Warriors Fanfic: Shrouded Sun Prologue?

It's FanFiction for the Warriors series, by Erin Hunter. If you don't that's ok...

*Poke*

Part One
Part Two

~JFW1415

I noticed that your boutique looked a bit empty... and I happen to have posted something yesterday that hasn't gotten any reviews yet (probably due to my lack of activity lately).

Raincatcher -- Part One

Thank you so very much!
~Azila~

Bonjour Suzanne!

I just started this, and it's pretty raw. It's in the "other fiction" section, because I wasn't positive if it was romance-based enough to be put in that section. And could you be really harsh, ripping off the stories head with your teeth, chew it, spit it out and then whack it with a broom? That would be great.

It's the first part of hopefully others, and I saw hopefully because I have a tendency not.. to.. finish... things. But this plot has promise! It's called "You're on in Five." Here's the link:

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Thanks a billion!

Oh yes, I have even more!

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Please and Thank You

Hi Suzanne!

Your critique on part one of Raincatcher was so awesome that I've come back asking for a repeat act on part two. Seriously, I have to say that I was feeling kind of depressed about that story until I got your review, when I realized "yeah -- it's got kinks, but it's not THAT bad."

So thank you so much. I will try to get you back as soon as possible. ^_^

~Azila~

Hey Suzanne!

Well, here's the story. Thanks so much in advance for taking a read. ^_^