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I would appreciate it if you took a look at this and told me what you think. I hope I copied the link right. Thanks!

Suz! Do you think you could review this story for me? topic65767.html
Thanks! Rip it to shreds
~peanut~

Suz, I humbly request a re-review of this poem. I believe I have made it much more concrete. :3

I was wondering if I could get a review?
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Thanks!

If you have the time, Suz.

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I will love you forever and ever if you review this for me :]

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Thaaaank you veeeery much :]


~Scarlett

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Could I bother you once more for a review? You were just so darn helpful and encouraging the last time, I can't resist. Whenever you have the time. I've taken your advice about the abstractions to heart!

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be as harsh as you want, review please pleasepleaseplease
thanks
Soap

I have a general fic short that I would very appreciate a review of, not really any requests concerning the review, just let me know what you think if you have the time. Thank you for your time, it is much appreciated. MVP topic66512.html

could you take a review on this one "Linger on Your Pale Blue Eyes"? is so, could you please not go on details and just give your opinion on it...Topic ID: 66562

As requested, all reviews posted until now have been given!

Just remember, lovelies, please read my initial thread to know the rules of requests. If you are asking for a review for someone other then yourself, you will not get a review. If you do not link to the work, you will probably not get a review. Going against both of these things frustrates me greatly.

If you want a review, make it easier on me and post to the link. I want to give you reviews, I do! But even more than I want to give reviews, I want people to read my initial thread. Hope everyone likes the reviews they got!

Hi! Can you review my link in my signature? Thanks a ton if you do! I'm an aspiring writer.

I have a request.

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It is in the fantasy section but this section has no fantasy elements that are obvious. If you didn't see it in the fantasy section you probably wouldn't even know it was fantasy. I suppose that's a bad thing.

Hey, Suz! Mind reviewing a short story for me? Thanks in advance!

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I've been experimenting more, definitely trimming down the floweriness of my writing, reducing the figurative language to a more appropriate level, I think. Trying to write pieces that are a little more substantial.

If you could, can you inform me of places I can elaborate and extend my first chapter. I appreciate a very meticulous review. I can't wait to get one from you. Thank You very much.
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