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Fri Feb 04, 2011 3:35 pm
Sins says...



Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay, you're free.

Would you do me the honour of reviewing the latest part of Stop and Stare for me? Take as long as you want. I'm patient. And ginger.

http://youngwriterssociety.com/topic75727.html

thx b@be. Pahahahaha

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I think I'm drunk.
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:50 am
Hecate says...



Hey Azila!
I promise this is not R rated! It's no where close to it haha xD
This is the first chapter of one of my old projects that I've gone back and decided to work on again! Tell me what you think of it now :) It seriously needs to be ripped apart by somebody!

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Sun Feb 06, 2011 11:58 pm
Azila says...



Done, stela and Skins!





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Mon Feb 07, 2011 2:36 am
Wariofart says...



If it wouldn't be too much trouble, can you review the first chapter of my novel, Sincerely, Smiley Face?

It's for a contest, so be as harsh as you want! Thanks in advance.
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That my love keeps writing again and again
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Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:19 pm
carbonCore says...



I would like a review on my story, "The Arkford Sleepidemic". Thank you in advance!
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Fri Feb 11, 2011 6:29 am
Azila says...



Oops, I forgot to update this. Well, I'm open now--but please don't post here unless you're prepared to wait up to a week for your review.

I'm not busy or anything (me, busy? absurd!), I just want to teach everyone the value of patience. ^_^





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Sat Feb 12, 2011 6:38 pm
Speele says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=76114

So my story is called After Life. This is chapter one. It actually seems just up your alley as I couldn't decide between sci fi, fantasy, paranormal, or other to put it in. I would LOVE a detailed critique but as I'm here begging for reviews, I'll take what I can get. What I offer in return? Eternal love.......?!?
A writer is someone who writes. Nothing more.





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Sat Feb 12, 2011 7:13 pm
Kagi says...



Hey A,

Would you mind reveiwing this for me?
Its not great but I posted it anyway as I'm trying to get over writers block. Title suggestions are appreciated.
Here
A boy who wants to be loved

Thanks
Got YWS?

If, when you mean to type yes you type yws, you know you belong. :P





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 12:26 am
Azila says...



Speele and kakagirl: check!





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:52 am
ScarletteRose says...



You give amazingly well thought out and detailed reviews. Just thought I'd mention that I admire your skill. :P

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Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:38 pm
Azila says...



Done. ^_^





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Tue Feb 15, 2011 4:45 pm
koinu160 says...



Hey Azila can you please review the prologue and first chapter of my novel "Dusk".

See here
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Thanks

~koinu160~





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Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:13 am
Yuriiko says...



Hello Azila!

Will you please review my entry for Snoink's Bad Writing Contest?

Warning: Please expect the opposite.

Thank you! 83

~yuri
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Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:28 am
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Azila says...



All done, Yuriishness! I gotta say that was a really... um... interesting review to write. O.o I've never tried to tell someone how to make their story worse before! ^_^








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