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Thu Mar 10, 2011 10:40 pm
EmmaJane says...



Hey Azila. I would really love it if you could look at the first chapter of my novel, Little Macey, in fantasy fiction.
Thank you!
~Emma
Your = Possession. Your shoes are so sweet!
You're = Omission. You're quite strange...

If you are confused about which to put, simply say in your mind "you are" and see if that fits the sentence. If not, you are looking for your.

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Sat Mar 12, 2011 12:40 am
Azila says...



Done, Emma!





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Mon Mar 14, 2011 3:09 am
lilymoore says...



I set up the Team Lumi club.
You now owe me. :P

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Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.





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Fri Mar 18, 2011 8:23 am
Hecate says...



Hey Azila, I know you don't understand poetry, but this one's pretty straightforward so I was wondering if you'd like to have a look :D

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Fri Mar 18, 2011 3:37 pm
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Azila says...



All done, stela! I hope that helped... somewhat...





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Fri Mar 18, 2011 7:21 pm
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HostofHorus says...



Hey Azila, would you mind reviewing this piece for me? It is in the general fiction.

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HostofHorus Author, Poet, Dreamer, and Expressionist.
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Need a review? Feel free to ask me! :)





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Sat Mar 19, 2011 7:44 am
Azila says...



I'm using my 1234th post to reply to my WRFF thread. How sad.


EDIT: I'm going to stop replying to this, so just feel free to keep posting your things, okay?
Last edited by Azila on Tue Mar 22, 2011 2:58 pm, edited 1 time in total.





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Mon Mar 21, 2011 7:13 pm
xDudettex says...



Hey Azila!

I've seen some of your awesome reviews around the forums and I'd really appreciate it if you could look at something for me. It's called 'Sometimes' and it's in romance novels. It's my first attempt at writing romance as a genre, not just a sub-plot, and I'd really like to know what you think.

viewtopic.php?t=77741 - the link to chapter one.

I'd be really grateful if you could find the time to review this for me :)

Thanks!
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Thu Mar 24, 2011 3:46 pm
Audrey says...



Hello! I was wondering if you could review Part 1 of my short story? It is a rather short piece (Just shy of 900 words) but I thought it best to break the story up a bit.

Liar Liar

Thank-you!

Audrey
"I've never told a lie, and that makes me a liar
I've never made a bet, but we gamble in desire
I've never lit a match with intent to start a fire,
But recently the flames are getting out of control"





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Sat Mar 26, 2011 3:24 pm
ultraviolet says...



Hey Zila! Mind reviewing this for me? The Deserter - Chapter 1. Thanks in advance. :D

loveness, ultraviolet <3
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Sat Mar 26, 2011 11:52 pm
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Ranger Hawk says...



Hi, you. I am not here to ask for a review for this, and I have not been wanting to get a review from you for ages, because your reviews are not awesome. Thanks! (or...no thanks?) ;)
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Mon Apr 04, 2011 3:31 pm
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Sins says...



At popular Skins's demand, I'm re-vamping this thread.

That gets me every time.

ohhithere.

Your thread isn't on the front page anymore. Me no likey. I know you don't like me posting in your WRFF thread, but hey, that's me for you, Turtle ears.

This will probably sadden you, but what can I say? It's what I do. Basicalilally, could you be a dear and review the latest part of Stop and Stare for me? viewtopic.php?t=78624 Because you haven't read any of the rewritten parts, it may mean you having to do so though... err, I'm being awkward. Sorry. It shouldn't take too long to skim through them, right...?

thxbabes.

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Sorry for writing an essay as a reply to this thread
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.





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Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:27 pm
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Riveneye says...



ooo I think I found one of my new fantasy fiction reviewers. You and Skins looked pretty good. I'm just getting back into the swing of things and I need some people to review some of my stories for this story novel collection type thingy. None of the stories are related so you should be fine.

Here's the two I need help with now

#1 http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/viewtopic.php?t=78099
#2 viewtopic.php?t=78101

I gotta get reviews on these and do some edits before I can put up the last three stories in the book. Also need to do some reviewing on other people's work. (Been inactive for awhile.) I'll probably come back for seconds then.
Well Good luck, Thanks and I hope you'll review this.
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