Young Writers Society

*Jaw drops on floor*

Seriously? Well, I have several...

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic26999.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27043.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic27001.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic21992.html

Wow, that's a lot. Well, if you critique anything of mine I will be INSANELY grateful. *Offers cookies as bribes*

Good luck with the military camp thing!

~JFW1415

Here's a couple of short stories for you to crit!

Sister of Mine: topic17474.html
One Fall: topic16783.html

A poem, perchance?

Suspensional Combustion

Pleas and thank you!

-Kylan

Hehe, thanks for giving me direction, guys. No promises on how quickly I'll get to them, but I hope to get a niiiiice good look at them all.

And not camp! Don't say camp. It's a beautiful, pretigious, amazing military academy, sillies.

Jack - Yes! Please write me something! Or I'll critique all your poems from 2005. XD

topic27150.html

Haha, I did write something. If you have time, it needs severe harshness, haha.

I know I am behind, my pretties, but if you want a review, this is my last call for requests. I only have a few weeks to make the large majority of my goal. Whee procrastination.

Break-Up.
Anniversary.

If you'd be so kind.

This chapter is lonely...

topic30973.html

This is the third chapter, as there are two chapters and a prologue before - I don't expect you to critique those, but you can skim them if you'd like, none of them are long. If you're uncomfortable doing that, you could just critique the prologue, even though it's a bit old.

May I help?

R.ed R.ideing H.ood: wolfish boy

topic31000.html

Oh dear, you definitely have a lot in front of me. Here's something that could use a few pairs of eyes. If you don't get to it, that's fine, but here it is!

The Dragon, the Dog, and the Dove

The Academy sounds exciting, by the way! ^^

~ Jabber ~

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-Alice