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Sat Mar 16, 2013 10:35 am
ShakespeareWallah says...



Rydia!

I'd really love a review on this work.php?id=100328

Thanks,
Puck
  





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Sat Mar 16, 2013 5:30 pm
dogs says...



Hey Rydia! Could you please do me a huge favor and give me some suggestions on my poem that I've written here: work.php?id=100311

I'm planning on submitting it to Kokopelli (The school's literary magazine composed of the best student works throughout the year) so please go all out in critiquing. Thank you so much!



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Sat Mar 16, 2013 8:22 pm
abelgaiya says...



Here's another excerpt from my Supernatural/Sci-fi novel: 'The Journals of Maynard Ray: Dream Casters' work.php?id=100347
Stretching your thoughts beyond logical purview is called imagination. Stretching your thoughts beyond illogical purview is called insanity. I aim for insanity. - Abel Gaiya
  





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Wed Mar 27, 2013 10:33 pm
CandidDreamer says...



Thank you so much.
work.php?id=100496
This is the first chapter to Risk, my first book. I hope you like it
Stay Dreaming! ;)
  





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Fri Apr 05, 2013 9:54 pm
WritingWolf says...



Hi Rydia. I was wondering if I could have a review for the fourth chapter of a story I'm writing for a contest?

It would be a big help. :)

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Fri Apr 05, 2013 9:57 pm
helovedme13 says...



work.php?id=100737#c356272 please review this for me(:
  





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Mon Apr 08, 2013 5:02 pm
Rydia says...



I'm changing this to Not Accepting for the moment while I catch up! I've been a bit bogged down with work and poetry this month, but don't worry, I'll get to the reviews sometime soon!
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Fri Aug 23, 2013 10:30 pm
deleted17 says...



I'm getting ticked off. I've had this last part of the story posted of almost a month. What the Heck? It hasn't been reviewed, or even read by anyone! (I'm trying to contain my anger.)
It's called 'Preventing The End Of The World ENDING'.
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Fri Nov 16, 2018 9:20 am
Rydia says...



I need to eventually catch up to Snoink's review count so no promises of quick reviews but if you post here I'll get it done eventually!
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Wed Nov 21, 2018 4:35 am
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Elinor says...



Hey Heather! Could you check out the first part of my short story pretty please?

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Sun Nov 25, 2018 8:06 pm
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I should be able to get to this tomorrow or Tuesday @Elinor :)
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Mon Nov 26, 2018 11:56 pm
Tenyo says...



Do you still review anything?
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Tue Nov 27, 2018 8:41 am
Traves says...



Greetings, Rydia!
I read a recent review and of yours and I really liked the way you made sense of a piece.
I have a review request too, but it's on an old work and I needed more general criticism so I am here.

I used to write poetry like this
The Spectre of Hatchitt Hill
since 8th grade but I felt that poems like these got too long and boring, so I changed to trying shorter ones.

I'd be grateful if you could go through this and tell whether a topic like this might be better suited for a short story, and what kind of things I'd have to keep in mind then?
Or if I should try to shorten this? (I'm completely open to other kinds of criticism too)

This one is long and there is no urgency.
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Tue Nov 27, 2018 6:19 pm
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Rydia says...



@Tenyo I'm probably going to regret saying this but yes, I still review anything! What you got? :)

@Traves Thank you, I'm glad you liked the review and I'll happily take a look at your poem and answer the questions as best I can! I'll have some time this weekend for sure so expect it by Sunday at the latest ^^
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Tue Nov 27, 2018 9:14 pm
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Tenyo says...



The Storm is Quietest at the Bottom of the Bottle

This! The sound quality sucks (I have to borrow equipment when record it properly) so abide the technical nuances. I'd like feedback on how it is as an audio or audio/written piece.

Thankyou! Lemme know if there's anything you want in return =]
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