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Sat Jan 12, 2013 4:42 pm
Rydia says...



Who wants the next one?
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Mon Jan 14, 2013 11:46 am
*coco says...



May I?

Title: Dark Lies
Genre: Mystery/suspense
Link: work.php?id=98967

Thank you!
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Tue Jan 15, 2013 3:30 am
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VampireSenshi says...



When you have the time :3

work.php?id=99043
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Wed Jan 16, 2013 5:30 pm
BenFranks says...



Hello Heather.

My Preface poem has been sitting all lonely. Would you pleasure it with your company and critique?

Many thanks.
Benjamin Franks
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Mon Jan 21, 2013 5:15 pm
Questio says...



work.php?
Please reveiw. :)
  





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Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:26 pm
PurpleMoment says...



My name is Ashley. I found this poem among my things. It's from a few years ago. I don't remember when or why I wrote it, but I'm quite impressed with it myself and I would love your feedback on it.

work.php?id=99293
  





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Sun Jan 27, 2013 1:01 am
Rydia says...



All done! I have a few things on my list for review day, though I'm off to bed after this one I'm currently working on because seriously, need sleep!

But if you want to make sure I don't run out of stuff, go ahead and request! I've probably space for another two or three and even if I don't get to them tomorrow, there's always next week ;)
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Sun Jan 27, 2013 5:18 pm
youssefayman says...



Hello i was wondering if you guys could review my first chapter of my novel. i really need some professional advice, so it would be great if you guys could review it. thank in advance. work.php?id=99215
  





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Mon Jan 28, 2013 9:38 pm
RylieJane says...



Hello,

I am new to this site and I have written two poems. If you would be willing to review them, I would really appreciate it :)

Thank you!
  





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Thu Jan 31, 2013 8:24 pm
Morrigan says...



Hi there.
I was looking for more opinions on my poem, since I've revised it a bit now. Would you please take a peek?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=99409

Thank you very much.
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Thu Feb 14, 2013 8:44 pm
Clarity says...



Hey, can you review this please? work.php?id=99796 :D
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Sun Feb 24, 2013 1:16 am
Rydia says...



I'm going to bed now but the last time I checked, tomorrow was still review day ;) I've got a few celebrations under way but should find time for a couple of reviews so who wants one?
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Thu Mar 07, 2013 11:54 am
umaima says...



work.php?id=100187
work.php?id=100170
work.php?id=100185
thanx
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Mon Mar 11, 2013 6:40 am
troydenite says...



It's my first work, and I only joined this site an hour ago...

But apparently, there's a reciprocal system in place for reviews? Kind of a mutual backscratching system?

I would greatly appreciate it if someone could offer further information on this. Also, I would be grateful if you could look over this first piece of writing, cobbled together in an hour or so.

Many thanks.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=100271
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Thu Mar 14, 2013 2:08 am
HostofHorus says...



Hey Rydia! Would you mind reviewing this for me? work.php?id=94750
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