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Tue Nov 29, 2011 10:05 pm
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Audy says...



Kitty!

I need your heeeelp. ^-^; Whenever you can get to it okay? I know you're busy.
  





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Fri Dec 09, 2011 10:13 am
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hey :) could you take a look at my chapter one please? its called The First Last Stand of George T. A. Mongtomery: Chapter One
Thank you!! :D
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Sun Dec 11, 2011 6:51 pm
ReisePiecey says...



Hello, Kitty. I need a lot of help with this poem I spat out yesterday. It's called This Winter and is in Other Poetry. It's very rough and I need some help smoothing it out because, if it turns out okay, I plan to turn it in to my Creative Writing teacher.

This Winter

Thank you. :D
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Fri Dec 16, 2011 12:02 am
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If you have time, I'd love a little critique on this. Thanks so much! :)
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Fri Dec 16, 2011 1:09 am
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Hey, could you review the first chapter of my novel? Thanks(:


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Fri Dec 16, 2011 2:52 am
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Would you mind reviewing my Novella? It's called Ghost of Theater Two
This is the Prologue:
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This is chapter one:
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I haven't had time to post the next chapters up here yet. Thanks so much!
  





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Fri Dec 16, 2011 10:21 am
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Rydia says...



Hai! These have been added to my list and you should all see your reviews this week :)
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Sun Jan 08, 2012 2:38 am
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I was wondering if you could take a look at this.
It hasn't really gotten any attention which is pretty disappointing, so I figured I'd venture over here. Only when you have the time, of course. Thanks!
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Tue Jan 10, 2012 10:53 pm
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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/view ... =2&t=91972

If I could get another opinion of my story, it'd be great. This is the only story I've ever written where I'm willing to re-edit until it's at its peak.
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Thu Jan 12, 2012 3:21 pm
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misstoria says...



Could please review this for me? It's a dramatic poem entitled "A little bit Stronger" but I'm accepting suggestions on the title.
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Sat Jun 02, 2012 10:31 am
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Rydia says...



Hi all! I am back to reviewing and I'm sorry for any links I missed because of the upgrades and the breakage of said links. If you want to post them again, by all means do or feel free to ask for a review on something else.

I'm going to try and do a review a day to earn my tortoisedom but so far I keep failing. I'm going to start up again tomorrow and if you give me links, this will be helpful.
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Sat Jun 02, 2012 12:39 pm
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Do it do it do it baby,
Come on and do it to me.
Do not go gentle into that good night.
Rage, rage against the dying of the light.

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Mon Jun 04, 2012 12:07 am
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Rydia says...



Done :)
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Mon Jun 04, 2012 1:11 am
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Would you review the first chapter of my story for me?

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Please and thank you.
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Mon Jun 04, 2012 10:23 pm
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Rydia says...



Also done :)
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