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Mon May 23, 2011 4:04 am
Lumi says...



I'll give you lots and lots of cookies.
regardless of warnings

the future doesn't scare me at all
  





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Mon May 23, 2011 6:41 am
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cupcake says...



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Can you please review tis if you have time?
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Tue May 24, 2011 6:35 am
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Lavvie says...



MacNair, please?
What is to give light must endure burning.
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Wed May 25, 2011 7:13 pm
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Vampyre says...



Hey, would you please have a go at my poem?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post865211.html#p865211

Thank you dear :)
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades


  





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Sat May 28, 2011 3:21 pm
Rydia says...



All caught up now, except for the last but I'm about to do that so... next please! :D
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Tue May 31, 2011 2:31 am
KatTrain says...



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please and thank you!
So, a dyslexic man walks into a bra....
  





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Tue May 31, 2011 3:07 am
Butterfinger says...



Hi-ya! Review please? Thanks!
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If you want to be a great writer, don't think about what you're going to write, just write it.

I'm a huge fan of writers block! When your brain halts, with no direction for where you should go, it gives you threads. All you have to do is pull and unravel the story you're meant to write.
  





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Fri Jun 03, 2011 10:22 am
Twit says...



I don't know if your scary schedule has review-time penciled in, lol, but if you wouldn't mind, please?
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Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:07 pm
lilymoore says...



If you have time, Kitty, would you look at this poem?
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





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Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:35 pm
Rydia says...



:) All done!
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Sat Jun 04, 2011 8:01 pm
DakotaK says...



Hi Kitty,
I don't know if you do novel's at all... is there a place people post saying they want to review novels? lol. Anyways, if you're interested in doing a few chapters that would be awesome, rip em' to shreds, that's why I'm here right?

novel.php?id=1142

~Dakota Knight
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Rosette Christopher

Looking for peeps to review my novel:)

novel.php?id=1142
  





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Sun Jun 05, 2011 9:41 pm
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LittlePrincess says...



If you are not to busy I would love a review for chapter 4 of my novel novel.php?id=1419
It most likely will not make sense out of context so you might want to skim the first three chapters.
I realize that is asking a lot so don't feel obligated to read all of them. I would appreciate a review on an earlier chapter if you would rather do that or you could read chapter four out of context?

Thank you in advance. If you want a review in return (which I will be happy to do) then just post it at the end of your review or send it to me. :)
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Tue Jun 07, 2011 1:12 am
Loller65 says...



I LOVE YOU

REVIEW THIS

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please?
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Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:02 pm
reaganpark says...



Hey, I posted the prologue of my story on here and I'd really appreciate a review. :D I got like two, and I changed it up a bit since then. It be awesome if you could just give me a couple of suggestions. thanks!
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