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Rydia's Reviews [Not Accepting]
Mon May 23, 2011 4:04 am
I'll give you lots and lots of cookies
There is a shipwreck between your ribs. You are a box with
fragile written on it, and so many people have not handled you
Mon May 23, 2011 6:41 am
Can you please review tis if you have time?
God gives us our relatives - thank God we can choose our friends.
- Ethel Watts Mumford
A real friend is one who walks in when the rest of the world walks out.
- Walter Winchell
“I’ll Surprise you, I promise”
Tue May 24, 2011 6:35 am
What is to give light must endure burning.
– Viktor E. Frankl
Audrey Hepburn will review for you
Saturn: A Project in Sentimental Prose
Wed May 25, 2011 7:13 pm
Hey, would you please have a go at my poem?
Thank you dear
That night she drew her swan breath in a bed
Made soft with all her razor blades,
That kissed her wrists with the romance you lacked.
As the hands that you’d kissed now dealt the trades
Don't worry 'Darling', I can't tell your superior blood from mine either.
Sat May 28, 2011 3:21 pm
All caught up now, except for the last but I'm about to do that so... next please!
I love Iggy!
Sun May 29, 2011 4:20 am
Please vote and review!
Tue May 31, 2011 2:31 am
please and thank you!
man walks into a
Tue May 31, 2011 3:07 am
Hi-ya! Review please? Thanks!
If you want to be a great writer, don't think about what you're going to write, just write it.
I'm a huge fan of writers block! When your brain halts, with no direction for where you should go, it gives you threads. All you have to do is pull and unravel the story you're meant to write.
Fri Jun 03, 2011 10:22 am
I don't know if your scary schedule has review-time penciled in, lol, but
if you wouldn't mind
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."
Fri Jun 03, 2011 11:07 pm
If you have time, Kitty, would you look at this
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
Sat Jun 04, 2011 12:35 pm
I love Iggy!
Sat Jun 04, 2011 8:01 pm
I don't know if you do novel's at all... is there a place people post saying they want to review novels? lol. Anyways, if you're interested in doing a few chapters that would be awesome, rip em' to shreds, that's why I'm here right?
What is important is to know fear and yet take a step forward.
Looking for peeps to review my novel:)
Sun Jun 05, 2011 9:41 pm
If you are not to busy I would love a review for chapter 4 of my novel
It most likely will not make sense out of context so you might want to skim the first three chapters.
I realize that is asking a lot so don't feel obligated to read all of them. I would appreciate a review on an earlier chapter if you would rather do that or you could read chapter four out of context?
Thank you in advance. If you want a review in return (which I will be happy to do) then just post it at the end of your review or send it to me.
"One sees clearly only with the heart. Anything essential is invisible to the eyes."
The Little Prince
Tue Jun 07, 2011 1:12 am
I LOVE YOU
"There are no absolute rules of conduct, either in peace or war. Everything depends on circumstances."
Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:02 pm
Hey, I posted the prologue of my story on here and I'd really appreciate a review.
I got like two, and I changed it up a bit since then. It be awesome if you could just give me a couple of suggestions. thanks!
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It is not enough to do your best; you must know what to do, and THEN do your best.
— W. Edwards Deming
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