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Fri Jun 10, 2011 4:21 pm
HollowPointSmile says...



AHH! Thank you! I love it when people review me. :) So far I only have one chapter of one book out (I'm a new user) and I need people to review it while I work on the next! I really appreciate this! Anyway, here's the link: viewtopic.php?t=82202
  





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Fri Jun 10, 2011 9:12 pm
Rydia says...



No problem! I will get through those requests as soon as I can, but no longer accepting reviews until I'm all caught up.
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~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

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Sat Sep 03, 2011 9:45 am
Rydia says...



A few more chapters to finish for Dakota but I'm going to start accepting requests again. I'm aiming to do 100 reviews this month and a nice long list might help to motivate me since I'm a little behind schedule at the moment.
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Mon Sep 05, 2011 10:19 pm
Ultimateanon says...



If you want, you can review my novel I have up. It's only four chapters, while Chapter four is only half of it. Thank you :D.

novel.php?id=1715
  





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Thu Sep 08, 2011 10:12 pm
Jas says...



post912576.html#p912576

Could you please review that? Thank you!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

~*~
  





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Sun Sep 18, 2011 10:35 am
UrbanNomad says...



Hi there,
if you want to review my poem
post916429.html?hilit=clouds#p916429

it is called "Clouds" and is about writers block
Thanks, Oliver
  





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Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:13 pm
Blues says...



Hello Kitty!
Could you critique this please? post916620.html#p916620
It's a short story based on the events of 7/7. It's got many likes but only a few reviews...
It's not graphic though. I didn't mention anything with blood in case you don't ... really ... like it XD I noticed your location is in England (Go Britain!) so you might know some on the topic.
Thanks!
- Mac
Last edited by Blues on Tue Sep 20, 2011 12:38 pm, edited 1 time in total.
  





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Sun Sep 18, 2011 8:23 pm
williegonnawonkya says...



When you get the time please review my poem. I am new here and I need some help too if you don't mind.
  





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Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:14 pm
BaronFlame says...



Hey Kitty
Would you kindly critique this poem (if you get the time that is)
viewtopic.php?t=87718
Thanks :D
P.s: (Just in case) If you're feeling super generous and want to go a critiquing-spree, of sorts, I've got more poems just waiting to be critiqued. :P
"I don't know half of you half as well as I should like; and I like less than half of you half as well as you deserve." - Bilbo Baggins

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Thu Sep 22, 2011 12:22 am
Audy says...



Kitty!

I would really appreciate feedback on my poem. :D Thank you!
  





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Sun Nov 06, 2011 2:03 pm
Sins says...



Heya, Kitty!

When you find the time, could you please check out a fantasy prologue of mine? It's awfully rough though, so don't expect anything amazing. viewtopic.php?t=89882

Thankies!
I didn't know what to put here so I put this.
  





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Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:22 pm
Rydia says...



It's on my reading list :D
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Sun Nov 06, 2011 4:37 pm
MrSherrington says...



My novel hasn't been touched with a barge pole...most disconcerting. I wonder if you could have a look in obvious exchange for review times of my own...or some sort of perverse effigy to a dark god of your choice. It's the only novel I have so It'll be easy to find. Tally-ho and all that.
  





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Tue Nov 08, 2011 4:50 pm
Gheala says...



Please, review! An except from my Romance/Crime novel.
post933049.html#p933049
I'm back to my YWS after months of disappearance, hoping that I'd gain the immunity of books and quills against the harmful realism of our world.

In case this made no sense, I'm just saying that I'm happy I'm back!
  





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Tue Nov 08, 2011 5:14 pm
TylynRae says...



Hi there =] I have this piece called To Lie Down With Dogs... its slightly on the explicit side, and is therefore rated 18+. I rated it that so then, if people weren't used to what I'm saying, they'd know not to read it. There's no cussing. The subject matter is about a rape victim of sorts dealing with the aftermath. If you'd rather not review it, I completely understand. Here's the link of you do =]
topic89963.html
TylynTyrannosaurus<3 (tydecker777)
  








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