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Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:16 pm
PixieStix says...



Can you please review this poem? Thank you!
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2012 5:34 pm
UFO says...



If you wouldn't mind.
I've re-written the first chapter of my novel in the first person because I felt like I was losing my main character's personality when written in the third. This is part 1 of the chapter, wouldn't mind a quick peek.

work.php?id=96692
  





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Thu Aug 02, 2012 10:32 am
Rydia says...



18/100

I still need to do Enigma's, but you guys might as well start queuing me up a few more :D
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~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





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Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:30 am
Twit says...



I'm bugging you, yo. ^_^

work.php?id=96771
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:19 am
MorningDew says...



work.php?id=96772
Living in my own fairyworld... without rules or boundaries i am free


Don't judge a book by its cover, judge it by the words - Anon
  





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Mon Aug 06, 2012 1:30 am
Noelle says...



Could you look at my poem 'Why I Write'? Thanks!
work.php?id=96764
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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"I'm writing a book. I've got the page numbers done." -- Steven Wright

YWS is life
  





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Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:06 pm
Clarity says...



work.php?id=96801
review my poem please?:)
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


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Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:23 am
Celtichick3900 says...



Hey, I'm pretty new to this site and I just posted a rewritten version of an earlier story that I would like some advise on.There is heavy cursing, but I think it's essential to the characterization. work.php?id=96809
  





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Thu Aug 09, 2012 3:44 pm
Dradian Far Runes says...



Could you review this piece I'm thinking of submitting to a contest? work.php?id=96845

Thanks so much in advance. :)
They say the eyes
Are windows to the soul
I say the earth
The sky
The moon
The very breath upon my lips
All of these
Are windows
To you
  





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Thu Aug 09, 2012 6:16 pm
Rydia says...



I'll get to these as soon as I can, everyone. Probably once the YWS Olympics are over :)
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Wed Aug 15, 2012 3:01 pm
WordFlow says...



Please review! work.php?id=96928
Obama 2012
  





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Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:08 pm
Rydia says...



I'm changing my status to NOT ACCEPTING for the moment as my laptop is broken so I have very little access to the site. As soon as this problem has been resolved, I will catch up with my backlog and then start accepting again. Thank you for your understanding xx
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:15 pm
Rydia says...



I forgot to say I am once again Accepting! So feel free to post here :D
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:33 pm
Shady says...



Then I'll be first... :mrgreen:

I'm thinking of entering it in a competition, and would love to know if you think it's contest-worthy.

work.php?id=98548

Thanks!

~Shady 8)

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:56 am
JohnLocke1 says...



I have seen your reviews around the site and I would be absolutely honored if you would read the first chapter in a fantasy novel I am writing!

work.php?id=98700
"To prejudge other men's notions before we have looked into them is not to show their darkness but to put out our own eyes." - John Locke
  








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