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Sun Jul 29, 2012 7:16 pm
PixieStix says...



Can you please review this poem? Thank you!
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!
  





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Mon Jul 30, 2012 5:34 pm
UFO says...



If you wouldn't mind.
I've re-written the first chapter of my novel in the first person because I felt like I was losing my main character's personality when written in the third. This is part 1 of the chapter, wouldn't mind a quick peek.

work.php?id=96692
  





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Thu Aug 02, 2012 10:32 am
Rydia says...



18/100

I still need to do Enigma's, but you guys might as well start queuing me up a few more :D
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~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

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Sat Aug 04, 2012 12:30 am
Twit says...



I'm bugging you, yo. ^_^

work.php?id=96771
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


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Sat Aug 04, 2012 2:19 am
MorningDew says...



work.php?id=96772
Living in my own fairyworld... without rules or boundaries i am free


Don't judge a book by its cover, judge it by the words - Anon
  





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Mon Aug 06, 2012 1:30 am
Noelle says...



Could you look at my poem 'Why I Write'? Thanks!
work.php?id=96764
Noelle is the name, reviewing and writing cliffhangers is the game.

Writer of fantasy, action/adventure, and magic. Huzzah!

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"I'm writing a book. I've got the page numbers done." -- Steven Wright

YWS is life
  





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Mon Aug 06, 2012 6:06 pm
Clarity says...



work.php?id=96801
review my poem please?:)
"Be courageous and try to write in a way that scares you a little."

she/they


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Wed Aug 08, 2012 5:23 am
Celtichick3900 says...



Hey, I'm pretty new to this site and I just posted a rewritten version of an earlier story that I would like some advise on.There is heavy cursing, but I think it's essential to the characterization. work.php?id=96809
  





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Thu Aug 09, 2012 3:44 pm
Dradian Far Runes says...



Could you review this piece I'm thinking of submitting to a contest? work.php?id=96845

Thanks so much in advance. :)
They say the eyes
Are windows to the soul
I say the earth
The sky
The moon
The very breath upon my lips
All of these
Are windows
To you
  





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Thu Aug 09, 2012 6:16 pm
Rydia says...



I'll get to these as soon as I can, everyone. Probably once the YWS Olympics are over :)
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Wed Aug 15, 2012 3:01 pm
WordFlow says...



Please review! work.php?id=96928
Obama 2012
  





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Tue Aug 28, 2012 6:08 pm
Rydia says...



I'm changing my status to NOT ACCEPTING for the moment as my laptop is broken so I have very little access to the site. As soon as this problem has been resolved, I will catch up with my backlog and then start accepting again. Thank you for your understanding xx
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:15 pm
Rydia says...



I forgot to say I am once again Accepting! So feel free to post here :D
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Thu Jan 03, 2013 10:33 pm
Shady says...



Then I'll be first... :mrgreen:

I'm thinking of entering it in a competition, and would love to know if you think it's contest-worthy.

work.php?id=98548

Thanks!

~Shady 8)

"u and rina are systematically watering down the grammar of yws" - Atticus
"From the fish mother to the fish death god." - lehmanf
"A fish stole my identity. I blame shady" - Omni
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Fri Jan 04, 2013 3:56 am
JohnLocke1 says...



I have seen your reviews around the site and I would be absolutely honored if you would read the first chapter in a fantasy novel I am writing!

work.php?id=98700
"To prejudge other men's notions before we have looked into them is not to show their darkness but to put out our own eyes." - John Locke
  








Did you ever hear the Tragedy of Darth Plagueis the wise? I thought not. It's not a story the Jedi would tell you. It's a Sith legend. Darth Plagueis was a Dark Lord of the Sith, so powerful and so wise he could use the Force to influence the midichlorians to create life... He had such a knowledge of the dark side that he could even keep the ones he cared about from dying. The dark side of the Force is a pathway to many abilities some consider to be unnatural. He became so powerful... the only thing he was afraid of was losing his power, which eventually, of course, he did. Unfortunately, he taught his apprentice everything he knew, then his apprentice killed him in his sleep. It's ironic he could save others from death, but not himself.
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