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Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:55 pm
Button says...



I think this is my new haunt

If you don't mind. It's a poem, kind of long. :/

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Thu May 05, 2011 8:07 am
Rydia says...



Just going to bump this since it seems to be getting rather buried...
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Fri May 06, 2011 1:35 am
PhoenixRain says...



Pretty pretty please? :) topic80364.html
NaPoWriMo Count: 6 poems (only started on the 14th :P)
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Fri May 06, 2011 2:57 am
Qoh16 says...



Please critique my short stories series!! Especially my new one. You can read the rest if you want but don't have to :D

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Fri May 06, 2011 9:34 am
Rydia says...



Done and done :)
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Wed May 11, 2011 2:43 am
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Nightshade says...



Hi Kitty, your last review was wonderful, so I would love it if you would look at my latest poem. I'm particularly interested in how you interpret it and how I could make the meaning stronger/tighter. Here's the link:
topic80667.html

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Thu May 12, 2011 1:59 am
sarebear says...



Hey Kitty,

This is the first chapter of a novel I'm working on and was hoping you might look over it for me! Here's the link, thanks a ton in advance!

topic80672.html

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Thu May 12, 2011 10:03 pm
danceallnight says...



post860764.html#p860764

refer to my latest post, its the edited version
  





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Fri May 13, 2011 12:26 am
silented1 says...



if you're not too busy, please:

topic80524.html

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Link to my will review for food thread: topic71713.html
  





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Fri May 13, 2011 5:59 pm
Dreamwalker says...



Your critique on my 'Weathered' poem was so awesome that I felt the need to come back for another, if thats alright! I'll review something of yours in return, if you'd like ;D

Fire and Ice

Its an Allegory on the poem Fire and Ice by Robert Frost for a contest, hence why I need the critiques! So brutality is a must ;D None of that 'it was good in these aspects but...'. The meaner and harsher you are, the happier this person is!

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Sun May 15, 2011 10:01 pm
GirlInTheMirror says...



Hi! I was wondering if you could please comment on my story. It's commentless at the moment. Thank you soooo much!
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Wed May 18, 2011 9:47 am
Rydia says...



All caught up :)
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Thu May 19, 2011 9:33 pm
cannoncomplex says...



hello, can you review this piece of work for me?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post863193.html#p863193

I am experimenting on a style, and structure of the whole piece

Thanks
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Sat May 21, 2011 2:22 am
TylynRae says...



Hey there =]. I was wondering if you would mind reviewing one of my short stories? It's titled Breathe. I would very much appreciate it =]] topic81071.html#p863051
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Mon May 23, 2011 4:02 am
TaylaChase says...



Hi, I posted a new piece, and I was hoping you could review it for me, cause I really like your reviews :) Anyway, I hope it's not too long or boring. Thanks.


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