z

Young Writers Society


Rydia's Reviews



User avatar
31 Reviews



Gender: None specified
Points: 8135
Reviews: 31
Fri Jun 04, 2010 2:37 pm
austenite says...



If you've got more of that time can you take a look at the first part of The Fall, my short story? Gifts abounding...:D

topic64749.html
I will eviscerate you in fiction. Every pimple, every character flaw. I was naked for a day; you will be naked for eternity.
Chaucer, A Knight's Tale

Deceiving others. That is what the world calls a romance.
Oscar Wilde
  





User avatar
2631 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 6235
Reviews: 2631
Sat Jun 05, 2010 11:39 am
Rydia says...



Done :)
Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





User avatar



Gender: Male
Points: 1877
Reviews: 2




User avatar
64 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 12380
Reviews: 64
Mon Jun 07, 2010 10:52 am
View Likes
Attolia says...



Hey Heather,

Thank you so much for reviewing chapter two of my story! Really, it means a lot and helps a lot.

I just posted chapter three, and would love if you could give it a review as well:

topic64924.html

Thank you millions

Attolia
  





User avatar
2631 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 6235
Reviews: 2631
Mon Jun 07, 2010 12:39 pm
Rydia says...



Not a problem, it's next on my list :)
Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





User avatar
14 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 4360
Reviews: 14
Tue Jun 08, 2010 10:21 pm
TurquoiseRoses says...



I have the first two parts of the first chapter of my fantasy novel up, they are both relatively short. (around 800 words) If you could critque the second part, that would just make my day. :D Though, you'll probably have to read the first part for the second part to make sense. But here is the link.

Thanks!
  





User avatar
547 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 49345
Reviews: 547
Wed Jun 09, 2010 3:18 am
captain.classy says...



So I'm going to request another thing! But this time, it's mine. :P

topic64472.html

Thanks so much Kitty!
  





User avatar
64 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 12380
Reviews: 64
Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:49 am
Attolia says...



Next chapter is up, whenever you can get to it. Thanks so much for the help so far :D

topic66023.html
  





User avatar
1176 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 1979
Reviews: 1176
Tue Jun 29, 2010 2:30 am
Twit says...



Hai Heather!

If you'd be so kind as to cast your eagle eye over this, please:

post730422.html#p730422

It needs work, so feel free to be as cruel as possible. Unsheath your kitty-crit-claws. ;)
"TV makes sense. It has logic, structure, rules, and likeable leading men. In life, we have this."


#TNT
  





User avatar



Gender: Male
Points: 1877
Reviews: 2




User avatar
27 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 4464
Reviews: 27
Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:12 pm
View Likes
HorseradishCares says...



I was wondering if I could get a review on my poem, please?:

topic66141.html#p730736

Thank you, you're the best! Hopefully your claws will dig out the wonder and terrible-ness of it.

~Horseradish
Dear Diary,

Today I was pompous and my sister was crazy.
It was the best day ever. XD

~Jayne, from Firefly


Spoiler! :
Join the fight to end discrimination, hate, and misunderstanding~
Support LGBTQ!

viewgroup.php?f=336
  





User avatar
675 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 28467
Reviews: 675
Wed Jun 30, 2010 4:18 am
lilymoore says...



I see that you have quite a few requests right now, but if you have time, would you take a look at my poem. Pleease!

topic66186.html

Thanks a bunch!
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
  





User avatar
2631 Reviews

Supporter


Gender: Female
Points: 6235
Reviews: 2631
Wed Jan 12, 2011 7:37 pm
Rydia says...



*Wipes away cob-webs* Anyone looking for some freebies?
Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





User avatar
81 Reviews



Gender: Other
Points: 1503
Reviews: 81
Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:35 am
Pigeon says...



Hi! I wrote a poem at around midnight last night. It's a bit rough but I don't really know what to do with it. If you have time to do a review that would be awesome! :)

topic74740.html

Thank you!
-pigeon
Reader, what are you doing?

  





User avatar
562 Reviews



Gender: Female
Points: 719
Reviews: 562
Sat Jan 15, 2011 6:55 am
Button says...



If you have some time, could you please take a peek at this?
topic74672.html

I'd very much appreciate it. :)
Thanks!
  








Doors are for people with no imagination.
— Skulduggery Pleasant