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Wed Apr 23, 2008 3:23 am
JFW1415 says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic28900.html

Revised version of He's Just Human. It's due soon - can you give it a quick glance?

Thanks!

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Wed Apr 30, 2008 11:30 pm
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Part One
Part Two

'Cause your amazing and you love me. :wink:

And would you like a critique?

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Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:12 pm
Rydia says...



Just to let you all know that I've now got two weeks of freedom so if you have any critique requests, now's a great time to send them.

I have a list of about eight at the moment but if you give me more links then I have something to look at once I've done those and I promise that the longest you'll have to wait is three days (unless it's an advance critique or I get absolutely flooded with requests).
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Tue Jun 17, 2008 5:48 pm
Sapphire says...



I would really like more thoughts on this poem:

Sinking

I had trouble with it so that would really help me out.

Thank you!

:)
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Wed Jun 25, 2008 7:38 pm
Rydia says...



I need more requests! Come on people, there's a begging permit here with your name on! I'm pretty hopeless at finding random pieces for me to critique these days and I've grown laaazy so I need you to help me out! Request a critique, you know you want to, right?
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Thu Jun 26, 2008 12:28 am
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JFW1415 says...



*Poke* If you're begging...

Suicide Kills Us All

(It's a very light 'R.' Just a few swears and slutty girls saying that they love Connor.)

I know it needs a lot of work, but it's better to have a lot of opinions before I get working on editing, si?

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Thu Jun 26, 2008 2:40 am
Icaruss says...



Kitty! I loved the critique you gave me for my Advanced Critique section novella a while back, so here I am again, begging for another:

I got a three-part story called Tangled Up In Blue. It's from the Romance section and it's rated R. You don't have to read the three parts if you don't want. Don't even have to finish reading the first one.

But... it'd be nice. Thank you!

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Sat Jun 28, 2008 12:13 am
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I actually have a story that has description! Like, your level of description! And that I think needs more! *Gasp* 'tis a historical moment right here.

Anyways, I think you'll like it, and I will look forward to your details critique. :)

Out of Focus

Thanks so much Heather!

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Mon Jun 30, 2008 3:16 am
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You asked for it, here it is.

Crit.

There, now you've something to do. :P
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Mon Jun 30, 2008 4:26 am
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Want to do a song? Not my best, but it's alright.

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Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:04 pm
ProfessorRabbit says...



Never mind. :P
Last edited by ProfessorRabbit on Tue Jul 01, 2008 3:34 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Mon Jun 30, 2008 11:43 pm
Medusa says...



Kitty (:

It would be awfully nice if you critted my Dawn With Fox on my Featured Works.

hehe.
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Wed Jul 02, 2008 4:49 am
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Hey, Kitty15. Will you to do me a favor and tear my poem to bits. Please?

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post389949.html#389949

Thanks bunches.
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Wed Jul 02, 2008 5:18 pm
PenguinAttack says...



Saber, love. This is rated R and it isn't fab, but I'd love a crit whenever you can get to it.


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Wed Jul 02, 2008 11:02 pm
Rydia says...



Okay, I'm going to make this the cut off point. I've certainly got time to do the remaining two critiques posted above but any posted after this message will probably not be done until I get back from my trip to Greece on the twentieth of July.
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