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Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:10 am
Dynamo says...



Since you said you liked the last three chapters, here's chapter 4:

topic26974.html
Chicken <-- Egg <-- Rocket Powered Fist
Take that, science!
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:22 am
cat4prowl says...



HAHAHAHA!!! I'll give you some links, but only because I want you to get that star... very very badly.

Anyways, if you get around to these that would be great but don't burn yourself out!

Chapter 1 and Chapter 2! thanx
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:25 am
Adnamarine says...



You deserve another star, so here's my contribution to the pile:

topic26608.html

Good luck!


*adna*
"Half the time the poem writes me." ~Meshugenah
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2008 12:42 am
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strawberrywine says...



Hi,
You could critc my work. I really need someone to fix up my grammar.

topic26954.html

I'm not sure if that will work. If not it's called Diary, EDITED. Under non-fiction.

-steph
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2008 2:58 pm
Dynamo says...



...and chapter 5:

topic27013.html
Chicken <-- Egg <-- Rocket Powered Fist
Take that, science!
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2008 7:37 pm
Wolf says...



You so deserve another star, Heather! So I thought I'd come and badger you:

Alphess: part one. :P
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic73903.html
  





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Tue Mar 11, 2008 8:46 pm
Periwinkle says...



I could really use an opinion on "The Monster":

topic26991.html
Maybe you should kiss someone nice or lick a rock, or both - Regina Spektor
  





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Wed Mar 12, 2008 3:03 pm
Dynamo says...



I've got another one for you, chapter 6:

topic27056.html
Chicken <-- Egg <-- Rocket Powered Fist
Take that, science!
  





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Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:45 pm
Rydia says...



Cat, let me know when you have those chapters back up and I'll critique them for you.


Only three more on the list now which might just last me tomorrow but I'll need others so feel free to add a link or two.
Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





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Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:49 pm
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GingerLizzy says...



Please could you critique my poem for meee?

Anniversay; Ginge's poem ;)
Worship the ginger monkey :) aaand join my new group!

Oh, and enter my new contest!
  





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Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:54 pm
GingerLizzy says...



Oh, and could I post some links of another person's piece? I'm really raving over her story, but I don't think she's got the amount of reviews and praise that she deserves.

:3

Her Prologue
Chapter one; Part one
Chapter one; Part two

Thought I'd help out two people at the same time :3
Hope I don't seem cheeky.

Ginge
Worship the ginger monkey :) aaand join my new group!

Oh, and enter my new contest!
  





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Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:05 pm
Rydia says...



You've let me run out of things to critique...

Lol. I need to get some sleep anyway but make sure I have a few more by tomorrow. Still 39 before I reach the next star and I may go for another after that.
Writing Gooder

~Previously KittyKatSparklesExplosion15~

The light shines brightest in the darkest places.
  





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Fri Mar 14, 2008 11:12 pm
Sleeping Valor says...



^_^ Taking a break while DoaV skills come to me, and typing up a story from earlier this year. It's a romance, and needs all the love it can get.

topic27112.html

^_^ Thank you!
I'm like that song stuck in your head; I come and I go, but never truly dissapear.

And apparently I also write a blog.
  





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Sat Mar 15, 2008 2:22 am
yoha_ahoy says...



I can fix that! Here's my neglected story:

Circus Pirates 1

Circus Pirates 2

Good luck, and thanks! :D

~Yoyo 8)
@(^_^)@
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Sat Mar 15, 2008 9:34 pm
Wolf says...



> NN -- Prologue: Black Water, Red Flame

:D
everything i loved
became everything i lost.


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