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Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:40 pm
Tigersprite says...



Could you please rip apart this? Thanks in advance! :D

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Tue Jan 18, 2011 1:34 am
SilentRain says...



Hello, this is the poem I'm entering into the YWS Literary journal, I really need to have a good review on the puncuationand anything else thats needs to be fixed.
This is the link--> topic73956.html

Thanks very very very much!!

~Rain~
topic68479.html <---- Click here to have your poems reviewed!

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Tue Jan 18, 2011 5:38 am
ShadowKnight155 says...



Hello, I'm dying for a review. But I won't be a begger.

Please,please--there I go!

Heres Le link:
topic74695.html
Long, so I will be patient. It is Sci-Fi, don't feel pressured to read it unless you enjoy it.

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Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:45 pm
Button says...



Hi there!
If you find yourself with some spare time, could you please take a peek at this poem?
topic75208.html
It'd be greatly appreciated. :)
Thanks!
-Coral-
  





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Mon Jan 31, 2011 12:35 pm
Rydia says...



Oh lookie there, I'm all caught up :)

Next!
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Thu Feb 03, 2011 8:46 am
Button says...



HELllo again. I know, I just posted.
But you're pretty darn good at reviewing. :)
SO, I was wondering if you could please take a peek at this poem:
topic75824.html

I'm quite fond of the picture in my head that I associate it, and would like to clean it up a bit.

Thanks! :D
  





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Sat Feb 05, 2011 6:03 am
Jashael says...



Hi, Miss kitty with the pretty avatars and pretty violet stars, May you please review this?

MY YWLJ SUBMISSION [SHORT STORY]

Thanks a bunch! :D
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Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:51 am
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Hecate says...



Hey Kitty!
Will you review the first chapter of my novel for me please? Thank you ^^

topic75931.html
  





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Tue Feb 08, 2011 10:08 pm
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HostofHorus says...



Hi Kitty! First off, I love your avatar! :D Secondly, could you pretty please give me one of your amazing reviews on my latest poem I wrote for someone special?! here is the link: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic76079.html So yeah I would really appreciate some nice critiquing, especially if it like included sardines and stuff..... :D (Cuz your a cat if you didn't get that...)
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 12:36 am
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Rydia says...



All caught up, get those requests in guys! And uh... people can 'like' WRFF threads? I only just noticed that xD
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Tue Feb 15, 2011 1:24 pm
RainWanderer says...



To miss Kitty15,

If you may grace my humble short story with your excellent critique, miss Kitty, I would be greatly appreciate. I have been searching for a mature reader for this short story, and I find in you a perfect critic that would be able to give me a better understanding of my limitation. I shall await your reply.

Humbly yours,

RainWanderer.
Who am I? Just a wanderer, traveling from real life to dreams.

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Fri Feb 18, 2011 2:43 pm
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Rydia says...



All done :)
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Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:19 am
Eniarrol says...



Hello, could you please review/destroy this viewtopic.php?t=75564
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Sat Feb 19, 2011 4:04 pm
writerwithacause says...



Hi, Kitty! :) My novel could use some reviews, it would be great if you could read the two chapters. Here it is: novel.php?id=1118

Take your time and thank you in advance!
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