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Sun Mar 16, 2008 2:56 am
AVilicious666 says...



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have at it. ><
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:48 pm
Dynamo says...



Outpost 101 chapter 7 is up and ready for critiquing.
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Wed Mar 19, 2008 11:51 pm
enjeru says...



yep!!

Risen from Ashes: Chapter Two

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Sun Mar 23, 2008 2:05 am
JFW1415 says...



*Pokes*

I'd love one! :P But I'm too lazy to get links...

'All Eyes On Us' in Romance
and/or
'For Matty' in Other
and/or
'Reality' in Other (about to edit this one, could use some critiques before I do so.)

They're all short, about 500-1500 words long. :P

Thanks a million!

~JFW1415
  





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Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:33 pm
Rydia says...



I'm now up-to-date with all critiques so far so feel free to give me a few more links.
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Sun Mar 23, 2008 1:55 pm
Kalliope says...



Hi Heather,

if you have any spare time I'd be really thankful if you'd take a look at this:

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I could really use some help :|

Thank you :)

All the best,
~Kalli
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Mon Mar 31, 2008 11:46 am
Dynamo says...



Got the next chapter ready:

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Wed Apr 09, 2008 8:07 pm
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Chapter ten is up and ready to go.

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Thu Apr 10, 2008 1:57 am
cat4prowl says...



If you could check out the second one in my siggy I'd be oh-so-grateful!! Thanks.
  





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Fri Apr 11, 2008 12:44 pm
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11 is ready to be critiqued.

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Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:03 pm
Incandescence says...



kittah--


No need for it, per se, but any of the Foreign Markets in the Scripts section would appreciate a quick glance.

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Cheers!
Brad
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Sun Apr 13, 2008 3:15 pm
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Chapter 12 is ready, I think you'll really enjoy this one.

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Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:37 am
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Here's chapter 13, hope you like this one, too.


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Fri Apr 18, 2008 6:28 pm
Rydia says...



Okay so I need to do lots of reviews this month so please give me all your links! Also, I may be interested in taking on a series of chapters for a novel or two if anyone has one in progress?
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