Hi, I would love it if you could help me out with a review on my short story Hypoxia. It's been a while since I've written in this medium so I'm trying to shake the rust off and feedback really helps. Thanks in advance
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be still, sad heart, and cease repining behind the clouds is the sun still shining
looseleaf wrote:Sorry for the late response, @Fishr, but I'll try to get to it this weekend! (poke me on Monday if I haven't done it yet ))
Heh. So. I did some editing, and now I’m not sure if it is qualified as a short story anymore. But if you want to give it a go, I’m most interested in character development. Memento Mori
hiya! No idea if this is still open, but if it is, I'd love if you'd review the opening chapter to my novel: Wakefield, Wyoming. 1941. As of typing, there's zero reviews and there's only a slight reference to blood and such, so hopefully that falls in line with your requirements. Thanks for considering!
Hi Looseleaf!! If you have the time, I'd really appreciate a review of my new poem. Just so you know, it is centering around politics, but it's nothing detailed just a reflection. Here's the link!!
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