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Fri Feb 25, 2022 12:00 am
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momonster says...



thanks so much!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Wed Mar 09, 2022 10:27 pm
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StormyZSnifter says...



Hey! Uuh if you're not too busy do you think you could review my third chapter of my novel? Anytime you could get around to it would be really appreciated. Thank yoouuu :)

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“It is well known that reading quickens the growth of a heart like nothing else.”

― Catherynne M. Valente, The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making

"I believe in Cornpy Supremacy."

- Stormy Z. Snifter
  





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Thu Mar 10, 2022 8:28 pm
looseleaf says...



Hey @StormyZSnifter! I read through it and, I have to admit, I don't understand the plot/characters. Should I read the first one through or can you explain what the characters are (werewolves??) and the plot?
  





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Fri Mar 11, 2022 12:05 am
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StormyZSnifter says...



Oh reading the previous chapters would definitely help lol I'm so sorry!! I don't have time to paraphrase the plot now but I swear reading the previous chapters would make it make sense
“It is well known that reading quickens the growth of a heart like nothing else.”

― Catherynne M. Valente, The Girl Who Circumnavigated Fairyland in a Ship of Her Own Making

"I believe in Cornpy Supremacy."

- Stormy Z. Snifter
  





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Tue Apr 26, 2022 5:13 pm
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Hawinay says...



Hello! I write poetry, I think you know that. If I am not mistaken, I believe you have liked a few.
I am interested to see your interpretations and would love a review or two on any of my work. You can pick whichever one interests you the most, whatever sings to your soul, a beggar can't be a chooser.
Thank you!
However bittersweet illusions taste, they are still filling and I could only hope to my wildest dreams that I could burden those tastes for you, and you can keep dancing in the artful rain.
  





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Tue Apr 26, 2022 7:54 pm
looseleaf says...



Hey @Hawinay! Thanks for the request. I'm a bit busy this week, but I'll try to get you some reviews next week (just ping me if I forget <3).
  





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Tue Apr 26, 2022 8:30 pm
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Hawinay says...



Of course! Do take your time, I am patient.
However bittersweet illusions taste, they are still filling and I could only hope to my wildest dreams that I could burden those tastes for you, and you can keep dancing in the artful rain.
  





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Wed Apr 27, 2022 2:07 pm
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NewHope says...



Hello Looseleaf,

I was wondering if you would review a poem... I posted it days ago and it's still in the Green Room. It's a little violent... a little bit of a rant and it's called: Born A Girl
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
  





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Wed Apr 27, 2022 6:17 pm
looseleaf says...



Sounds good, @lehmanf! I'm pretty busy this week, but I'll get to it when I can.
  





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Wed Apr 27, 2022 6:18 pm
NewHope says...



Thank you! Take your time and thank you so much for the star!
Swan Queen's little sister in-law/caretaker since 2022
  





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Thu Apr 28, 2022 7:01 pm
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Rascalover says...



I would love a review on my realistic short story called My Roots:

My Roots

If you like what you see, lest me know because I have turned this into a novel and may be posting it in the novel forum here on YWS!

Thank you so much!!
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html
  





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Thu Apr 28, 2022 9:20 pm
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looseleaf says...



Thanks for the request, @Rascalover! I'll get to it when I have the time. :)
  





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Thu May 26, 2022 2:43 pm
EsmerayaRose says...



Hello, I was wondering if you could leave a review on this Soil of misery
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

she/they
  





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Sun May 29, 2022 3:08 pm
looseleaf says...



Hey @QueenMadrose, sorry, but I'm not taking requests for poetry right now. I'll tag you when I start to review poetry again, though, if you want. :)
  





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Mon May 30, 2022 3:23 pm
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EsmerayaRose says...



Oh ok
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

she/they
  








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