Hey @AlyTheBookworm, This thread reads "closed" because I have realized that I never succeed at reviewing poetries in a decent manner. However, as there is no scene of getting out of the green room(I don't want a work to get out of GR for y stupid reviews), I will try reviewing the poem. I hope I will be able to do it by Friday. Remind me if I forget.
Oh- whoops! Sorry about that. I didn't see this was closed! ._.
In that case, no pressure and don't feel obligated at all to write one if you don't feel comfortable reviewing poetry!
Honestly, I was just a little bummed that the two reviews I got on it had no criticisms or recommendations for improvement, and that it's now out of the green room with little chance of anyone else seeing it- so I thought I'd ask for reviews around this forum. Anything you can come up with would be much appreciated, so don't feel like you need to make your feedback perfect and super in-depth.
I mostly just want your interpretation and reaction, to find out how well/not-so-well I conveyed the themes and ideas I wanted to convey with word choice, structure, and format. Advice on how to better convey them would be a step further, but again, any kind of thoughts or feedback at all would be helpful c:
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