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Tue Feb 09, 2021 2:33 pm
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momonster says...



hello! i hope you're doing great today.

i will review pretty much anything, just nothing with explicit content. my reviews focus mainly on grammar. i'll get to your reviews within 1-3 days of your request, but i will let you know if it will be longer. i hope my reviews are to your satisfaction! <3
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For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Wed Feb 24, 2021 4:03 am
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MapleWay says...



I wrote a little poem called The Passing the other day. It's not amazing but I wouldn't mind a review!

Here's the link!

The Passing
  





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Sat Feb 27, 2021 2:23 am
momonster says...



@MapleWay your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Sat Feb 27, 2021 3:19 am
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Riverlight says...



Lómë, the Maiden of Aloth Tiren

Poetry
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Sun Feb 28, 2021 3:44 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Pls review Love
And Because I love fun staffs

Hope you will enjoy
  





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Mon Mar 01, 2021 3:14 pm
momonster says...



@Vil /Kendall, your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Tue Mar 02, 2021 4:40 pm
momonster says...



@ForeverYoung999 your review has been given! I'll get to the other one tomorrow; thanks for requesting!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:16 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hello. Pls review Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)

It is a novel chapter
  





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Sat Mar 20, 2021 3:54 pm
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HJYoung says...



Exodus
It's a in-progress novel. I think the thing i need to improve the most is my dialogue.
I stand above this all. For with every virgin kingdom, there is always an august king.
  





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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:38 pm
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starbean says...



Link to work: questioning:
Type of work: (Poetry)
she/her————pro-life————Christian————climber of rocks, trees, and rooftops----reader of poetry, Antoine de Saint Exupery, Pam Munoz Ryan, and Anthony Doerr
"She is too fond of books, and it has turned her brain." -Louisa May Alcott
  





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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:45 pm
momonster says...



@hannah0528 thanks for requesting! I'll try to get to your review today. :D
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:49 pm
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Link to work: crows gather at the funerals of their own children
Type of work: Poetry
Warnings: Death and how death changes families is a reoccurring theme, but it's only just mentioned and not explained in great detail.
I love you as certain dark things are to be loved,
in secret, between the shadow and the soul.
  





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Thu Apr 29, 2021 5:07 pm
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momonster says...



@chikara your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Fri Sep 10, 2021 1:39 pm
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EsmerayaRose says...



Bright Lights
Link to work:
Type of work: poetry.)
Warnings: Its about me coming out to my family (only required if the work has questionable content)
I promise this type of pain only gets worse
~Esmeraya~

she/they
  





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Mon Oct 11, 2021 8:16 pm
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MissGangamash says...



Hi, could you please review my last two chapters? Fool Without A Master (Chapter 3 Part 2) and the next one. Or even better, from the first chapter if you have the time :D

It's historical fantasy/romance
  








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