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Tue Feb 09, 2021 2:33 pm
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MomoMajesty says...



Hello! I hope you're having a wonderful day! :smt026

What I will review:
Poetry (sample)
Novel chapters (I would prefer to review chapters earlier on in the storyline, but I'll review others anyway) (sample)
Short Stories (sample)

What I will not review:
Movie reviews
Essays

I will review 12 and under. I will not review anything with mature content or excessive language. Please take the form below and get requesting!

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My reviews focus mainly on grammar.

Thanks for requesting!
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Wed Feb 24, 2021 4:03 am
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MapleWay says...



I wrote a little poem called The Passing the other day. It's not amazing but I wouldn't mind a review!

Here's the link!

The Passing
  





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Sat Feb 27, 2021 2:23 am
MomoMajesty says...



@MapleWay your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
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Sat Feb 27, 2021 3:19 am
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Riverlight says...



Lómë, the Maiden of Aloth Tiren

Poetry
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Sun Feb 28, 2021 3:44 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Pls review Love
And Because I love fun staffs

Hope you will enjoy
She/ her

I love sarcasm to its fullest and I am a genius(You know what I mean :wink: )
  





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Mon Mar 01, 2021 3:14 pm
MomoMajesty says...



@Vil /Kendall, your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
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Tue Mar 02, 2021 4:40 pm
MomoMajesty says...



@ForeverYoung999 your review has been given! I'll get to the other one tomorrow; thanks for requesting!
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

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Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:16 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hello. Pls review Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)

It is a novel chapter
She/ her

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Sat Mar 20, 2021 3:54 pm
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HJYoung says...



Exodus
It's a in-progress novel. I think the thing i need to improve the most is my dialogue.
Sincerely,
H.J.Young
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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:38 pm
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hannah314159 says...



Link to work: questioning:
Type of work: (Poetry)
Weak people revenge. Strong people forgive. Intelligent people ignore.

- Albert Einstein
  





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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:45 pm
MomoMajesty says...



@hannah0528 thanks for requesting! I'll try to get to your review today. :D
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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:49 pm
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chikara says...



Link to work: crows gather at the funerals of their own children
Type of work: Poetry
Warnings: Death and how death changes families is a reoccurring theme, but it's only just mentioned and not explained in great detail.
The inner machinations of my mind are an enigma.
— Patrick Star
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Thu Apr 29, 2021 5:07 pm
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MomoMajesty says...



@chikara your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

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Fri Sep 10, 2021 1:39 pm
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BrokenHeartsAri says...



Bright Lights
Link to work:
Type of work: poetry.)
Warnings: Its about me coming out to my family (only required if the work has questionable content)
find your aesthetic and flaunt it
~Ari~
  








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