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Tue Feb 09, 2021 2:33 pm
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MomoMajesty says...



Hello! I hope you're having a wonderful day! :)

What I will review:
Poetry
Novel chapters (I won't go back and read the other chapters)
Artwork (not my strong suit; just warning you)

What I will try to review:
Essays
Prose

I will review 12 and under. I will not review anything with mature content or excessive language. Please take the form below and get requesting!

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My reviews mainly focus on grammar.

I RESERVE THE RIGHT TO DENY A REVIEW.
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

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Previously LordMomo and MomoandAppa
  





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Wed Feb 24, 2021 4:03 am
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MapleWay says...



I wrote a little poem called The Passing the other day. It's not amazing but I wouldn't mind a review!

Here's the link!

The Passing
  





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Sat Feb 27, 2021 2:23 am
MomoMajesty says...



@MapleWay your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

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Sat Feb 27, 2021 3:19 am
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TheScribe says...



Lómë, the Maiden of Aloth Tiren

Poetry
[We are a System. We were formerly @Vil. Honorine (she/her), Carolina (she/her), and I (VP/Vilnius, he/him) will be fronting.]
  





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Mon Mar 01, 2021 3:14 pm
MomoMajesty says...



@Vil /Kendall, your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

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she/her/hers/herself

Previously LordMomo and MomoandAppa
  





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Tue Mar 02, 2021 4:40 pm
MomoMajesty says...



@ForeverYoung999 your review has been given! I'll get to the other one tomorrow; thanks for requesting!
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

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Previously LordMomo and MomoandAppa
  





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Thu Mar 04, 2021 2:16 pm
ForeverYoung299 says...



Hello. Pls review Cortez Shivick (Chapter 1)

It is a novel chapter
  





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Sat Mar 20, 2021 3:54 pm
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HJYoung says...



Exodus
It's a in-progress novel. I think the thing i need to improve the most is my dialogue.
Sincerely,
H.J.Young
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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:38 pm
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hannah0528 says...



Link to work: questioning:
Type of work: (Poetry)
Weak people revenge. Strong people forgive. Intelligent people ignore.

- Albert Einstein
  





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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:45 pm
MomoMajesty says...



@hannah0528 thanks for requesting! I'll try to get to your review today. :D
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

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Previously LordMomo and MomoandAppa
  





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Wed Apr 28, 2021 3:49 pm
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chikara says...



Link to work: crows gather at the funerals of their own children
Type of work: Poetry
Warnings: Death and how death changes families is a reoccurring theme, but it's only just mentioned and not explained in great detail.
I'm sorry. We know how it works. The world is no longer mysterious.
  





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Thu Apr 29, 2021 5:07 pm
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MomoMajesty says...



@chikara your review has been given! Thanks for requesting!
Someone's missing from your group, someone very important ... Where's Momo?

Reviews~

Art Club~

Newbies Club~

she/her/hers/herself

Previously LordMomo and MomoandAppa
  








A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
— Roald Dahl