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Exodus
SF novel-in-progress, i need help on dialogue

Can u pls review Cortez Shivick(Chapter 9)

ty

@HJYoung Welcome to YWS! I'll be reviewing your writing tmw.

Thanks!

ty!

Hi, BrokenHeartsAri here to drop some poems that need some reviews.

1.I'm coming home

2.Broken

I hope you get a chance to check these out!

@BrokenHeartsAri
Okay! I'll see if I can review them this weekend.

Thanks for the request!
:D

@BrokenHeartsAri I'm so sorry for the time it took me to review it. I didn't have enough time since I started judging for April Madness. Fortunately, I had reviewed the first poem!

Again I'm very sorry and hope it is okay with you.

Have a nice day!

Hi there.

I was wondering if you could review my novel. I currently have 7 chapters and was looking for someone to read the novel as I wrote it.

It's an action\adventure\fantasy novel.

Here's the links to the parts I currently have.

Prologue: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Prologue

1: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 1

2: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 2

3: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 3

4: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 4

5: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 5

6: The Quest for Fire - Into the Mists - Chapter 6

Thank you in advance.

Best regards
Felistia

@felistia @BrokenHeartsAri Sorry for the late reply and review. As I posted on my wall, there was no internet in my country for about 40 days, and it just came back a few days ago.I will try to review them as fast as I can.

Thanks!
~Chris Calaid

@BrokenHeartsAri I reviewed all your requested poems. Thank you for the request!
Have a nice day :D