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Sun Sep 13, 2020 7:18 pm
momonster says...



thank you @Rosewood! i'll get to that soon.
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

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Tue Oct 06, 2020 7:02 pm
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Riverlight says...



@LordMomo Here's a poem I wrote last night

Dark Memories
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Thu Oct 08, 2020 1:57 am
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Glauke says...



Hi, I'd love a review on my new piece! I'm specifically looking for thoughts and advice regarding the ending. Thanks in advance <3

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Sun Oct 25, 2020 12:37 am
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Riverlight says...



Here ya go!

I Met a Senator Once
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  








In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien