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Tue Sep 08, 2020 5:55 pm
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LordMomo says...



Hey!

What I will review:
12 and under. I will not review something with mature content, I would prefer less language, but I'm okay with violence. (The last sentence sounded weird XD)

Thanks!
Last edited by LordMomo on Sat Nov 07, 2020 3:42 pm, edited 8 times in total.
  





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Tue Sep 08, 2020 5:57 pm
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Vil says...



Here you go!

Two Lovers Far Apart
Fresh and pure like a leaf
fluttering down to the forest floor,
you are my Evergreen,
keeping my heart behind a door.

[My name is Kendall.]

[They/Them/Theirs]
  





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Tue Sep 08, 2020 6:16 pm
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Stringbean says...



Here's the link to this one again : P

Unbreakable
  





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Tue Sep 08, 2020 8:45 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



You could use this one for the non-human POV thing in the checklist challenge: I'm Just A Pet Rock
"Yes, of course duct tape works in a near-vacuum. Duct tape works anywhere.
Duct tape is magic and should be worshiped."

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Thu Sep 10, 2020 2:25 am
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Stringbean says...



LordMomo wrote:@LZPianoGirl, @Vilnius, and @Stringbean, I'm so sorry for being late on the reviews! I will try to get to them soon.

No worries! There's certainly no rush on mine c:
  





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Thu Sep 10, 2020 2:40 am
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Vil says...



LordMomo wrote:@LZPianoGirl, @Vilnius, and @Stringbean, I'm so sorry for being late on the reviews! I will try to get to them soon.

Same here!
Fresh and pure like a leaf
fluttering down to the forest floor,
you are my Evergreen,
keeping my heart behind a door.

[My name is Kendall.]

[They/Them/Theirs]
  





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Thu Sep 10, 2020 12:20 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



There's no rush!
"Yes, of course duct tape works in a near-vacuum. Duct tape works anywhere.
Duct tape is magic and should be worshiped."

- Mark Watney, The Martian (book)
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2020 4:06 pm
LZPianoGirl says...



Hey Momo! I have two things for you to review (you don't have to if you don't want to)!

My Essay on the Rise and Fall of Postwar Independent American Car Companies and Comparing Them To Tesla

The Fall of Luxury in Airliners (with bibliography)
"Yes, of course duct tape works in a near-vacuum. Duct tape works anywhere.
Duct tape is magic and should be worshiped."

- Mark Watney, The Martian (book)
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2020 4:12 pm
LordMomo says...



@LZPianoGirl , I will try to give those a look, but neither of them are in the green room, so they wouldn't count for my journey to knighthood.
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2020 4:14 pm
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LZPianoGirl says...



Ah, that is true. Sorry about that!
"Yes, of course duct tape works in a near-vacuum. Duct tape works anywhere.
Duct tape is magic and should be worshiped."

- Mark Watney, The Martian (book)
  





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Sun Sep 13, 2020 7:13 pm
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Rosewood says...



Do you still need realistic poetry?

If so...

Empty
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