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Thu Sep 24, 2020 1:22 pm
Riverlight says...



I'll get to it today!
The politics of the world may be corrupt, but that does not mean that we must be corrupted ourselves.
  





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Thu Sep 24, 2020 7:57 pm
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@Andrewknorpp It may take longer than I expected, today's been busier than expected
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Sun Oct 11, 2020 5:10 pm
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I'm pausing this thread until further notice because I have challenged myself to review all of the works of several people. Feel free to leave a work here, it just might take me a while to get around to it.
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 12:38 am
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Vil wrote:I'm pausing this thread until further notice because I have challenged myself to review all of the works of several people. Feel free to leave a work here, it just might take me a while to get around to it.

This isn't going well at the moment, so I'm pausing this. :P
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:22 pm
omer says...



Hey Vil! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link:
Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
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Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:33 pm
Soccer23 says...



Hi!
If you could review this, that would be awesome! It's a chapter two, so not very far in but if it's too far in, that's ok
"Be yourself; everyone else is already taken"
"Just because you're trash doesn't mean you can't do big things; It's trash can, not trash can't"
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Fri Dec 11, 2020 2:21 pm
Valkyria says...



Hi, Vil!

I read that you review first chapters, so I would like you to review the prologue to my NaNo novel, please!

The Monster Whisperer Prologue
There is always something left to love.
- One Hundred Years of Solitude
  





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Fri Dec 11, 2020 2:37 pm
Mageheart says...



Hey! I heard you were in need of works to review, and my newest short story coincidentally is in need of some reviewing. :)

Here's the link to part one and here's the link to part two!
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Fri Dec 11, 2020 4:38 pm
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@Valkyria Your review has been done! Thanks for requesting it! <3

@Magebird, I'll try to do yours either later today or over the weekend.
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Mon Dec 14, 2020 4:04 am
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Hey @Vil! Could you do a review for me on That Face...?
(Title is a bit of a work in progress lol)
Quite... Overwatchful
Previously Stormblessed242 :mrgreen:
  





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@Stormblessed242 It will be done in the next few days!
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Fri Dec 18, 2020 8:04 pm
momonster says...



Hey Vil! Just wondering it's fine if you can't if you could review my WIP I am Mari?
Chapter 1
Chapter 2
For sin shall no longer be your master, because you are not under the law, but under grace.
Romans 6:14 NIV

never apologize for standing up for what you believe in.

previously MomoandAppa, LordMomo, MomoMajesty, and dancingontheclouds
  





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Fri Jan 01, 2021 6:56 pm
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@LordMomo I'll try to get to that after I get some GR reviews out of the way either today or tomorrow, I promise!!
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Tue Feb 02, 2021 6:57 pm
AceassinOfTheMoon says...



https://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=150072#c707901
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