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Tue Sep 08, 2020 1:09 am
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Ljungtroll says...



Thanks, guys! Sorry for the late reply. @Stringbean, have you got anything (particularly poetry) that you'd like me to review right now?
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 2:08 am
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RavenLord wrote:Thanks, guys! Sorry for the late reply. @Stringbean, have you got anything (particularly poetry) that you'd like me to review right now?

No worries!

I have a few poems in my portfolio, you're welcome to take a crack at whatever looks interesting! I've got another that I'm ready to post too, I think, once I get some more points.
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 2:12 am
Ljungtroll says...



Sweet. I'll take a look tomorrow when I'm back on the computer!
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Tue Sep 08, 2020 4:48 pm
Riverlight says...



Here's another if you have the time--

Two Lovers Far Apart
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Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:10 pm
Riverlight says...



Vil wrote:Here's another if you have the time--

Two Lovers Far Apart

Psst... @RavenLord...
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Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:19 pm
Ljungtroll says...



Oh crap I forgot. I'll get to it when I can, Vil. I've got a lot of school stuff right now and I'm not as free as I've been. Sorry! I'll see what I can do.
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Wed Sep 30, 2020 10:22 pm
Riverlight says...



Oh, ok! Sorry, take your time!!! <3
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Mon Oct 12, 2020 1:26 pm
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This is a spot for reviews, buddy. Please advertise elsewhere.
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:23 pm
omer says...



Hey Raven! I have a work with no reviews and I really want to know how I can improve my writing. I'd be happy if you could take a look at it! It would be easier to understand by reading the former chapter/s, but that's totally up to you. Here's the link:
Part 4: Water Plus Laptop
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:35 pm
Ljungtroll says...



This is my review corner, @omer. I'll see if I can take a look anyway. Vil's area is Vil's Reviews
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Sun Oct 25, 2020 8:39 pm
omer says...



Oh, yes, I was refering to you, just got confused because I sent Vil a message, too. Sorry about that!! :)
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Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:31 pm
Soccer23 says...



Hi!
If you could review this, that would be awesome!
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Tue Nov 10, 2020 7:52 pm
Ljungtroll says...



@Soccer23 I've posted the review :)
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Sun Dec 13, 2020 4:12 pm
Dest says...



Hello! I'm looking for some feedback on a short story I'm working on. Could you take a look?
Yolk's on Me (1)
  








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